StuffingPuffin
Stuffing Puffin
Are they trying to end the population boom by making high school students...”intermingle?” Because there are a few legal reasons why that would be an issue.I recommend changing to college students to avoid some pitfalls.
Other than that though, I wouldn’t mind reading it 
It’s not racist, but it’s not original. That’s okay though, as long as she isn’t writing with the intent to be published with a traditional company. That being said, there are other issues that may arise, but it depends on the target audience and platform.
Thank you guys for replying!
It helps me feel better to know that it’s so common. I got choked up reading your comments.
Here you go! Subs are great, but if anyone likes it enough to become a dedicated reader, I would like that even more.
I just finished the prologue and it was pretty good! I did leave a comment with a critique, I hope that's okay. I'll read more over the next few days so I can catch up. Here's mine:
This is a fun fact that I probably won’t incorporate into the novel, but Hannah likes drinking shots of hot sauce.
Subbed! I’d love it if you check mine out
https://m.tapas.io/series/The-Miss-is-a-Criminal/info
Just subscribed! It seems pretty interesting so far. Here’s mine:
I subbed yesterday without knowing about this Here’s mine. It’s brand new so there’s only one chapter so far. I’m still sitting at 0 views T-T
I just started my series, ‘The Miss is a Criminal,’ and I’d love it to get a little attention to help me stay motivated. There’s only one chapter so far, but a new one will be out every few days
It’s reincarnation/fantasy/romance but with a protagonist who’s a little more to my taste.