Swampert_Spawner
Ray Reuben W. Alvarez
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Hi! I'm Raven, and I hope you like my work!
Twitter: @SwampertSpawner
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Youtubers I recommend: Overly Sarcastic Productions - Hosted by the duo Red and Blue, who talk about media and history respectively. Red has several series worth noting, Miscellaneous Myths which talk about various myths, the Summarized series that talk about various popular stories (Modern Clas…
Thank you!! Wish you the best of luck as well in editing 
If I'm being completely honest, it's purely because I thought it sounded cool [:sweat_02:] On another note, this is part of a series I hope to be doing, and the word "Chronicle" also evokes that essence of a fantasy story that I wanted it to have.
It reads nicely! Here's a few suggestions on my end: - Rearrange the mentioning of things she lost so it flows smoothy, going from "the man she loved", "the use of her arms", "her hearing", and then her leg. That way the subjects using the same possession indicators are grouped together. - For the…
Oof, schedule got thrown in the ringer and my writing time had to be cut a bit 
it's quite hard to give the same amount of work on it with less the time but here's to hoping I'll make it!
Currently writing the next chapter and it's been going well so far, hopefully this lasts
I've taken a read through the first episode and I must say it's a good start! I can imagine some people probably saying that the Thomas talks is a bit too much for age (I was inclined to do the same but then I remembered how snarky my own 10-year-old brother is haha) I really like the gritty image…
I'd love to hear your thoughts on it! Thank you for this opportunity to take a read-through
Finally finished the newest chapter! It's been a bit of a slog but I finally finished it woo
“In each moment of crisis, someone is granted an extraordinary power, a blessing from Bathala himself. We call these the Stars, and those trusted with it the Keepers.”
I've been writing the newest chapter to my novel; it's a bit more dialogue heavy which I generally have a lot of trouble with. Here's to pushing through 
Glad to see a thread like this too; seeing others work definitely is a morale and inspiration booster!
“I don’t understand…? What’s the worst that could happen if a lot more people knew about you?”
“What? Of course I have. I started glowing and shit--oh, uh, sorry--” “It is fine, child.” Maria put her hand up, waving it in a dismissive motion. ”I am not such an uptight senior that I can’t handle a few swears. But do tell us from the top.”