
Turtur
Turtur
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Same here! It's been pretty nerve racking, but I'm excited to see who gets through since there's so many fantastic authors in the top 50. And yeah, everyone's getting so many boosts from the challenge which is a plus
Aww thank you @BellaTheCow for the shout out! The reading challenge is really boosting all the tourney stories so I'm glad other authors are getting traction as well!
If you don’t mind me chiming in, I’d like to second @Tubacabra 's advice. You really do need to build more of a following before considering a Patreon. Keep in mind that I’m a novel writer, so the following stats might not apply one-to-one for comics. As for a specific number of subscribers, there's…
Wanted to pop in to say a quick good luck and congrats to everyone who made it to the top 50! I definitely encourage everyone to check out as many of the stories you can because there's some real gems in there
Congrats! You're story is fantastic so I was expecting you to show up in the top 50, and I'm wishing you the best of luck with the rest of the contest!!

Checking out your manga right now, and so far it looks great!
Definitely glad it's finally over (at least the writing)! I can't wait to take a bit of a break and work on rebuilding my buffer. I don't really have too many expectations, but I'm glad I got to participate at the very least since I got meet so many other creators and really pushed myself to grow my…
Aww thank you! I loved your entry as well. Your action is just so well written and I'm excited to see the arc Argo goes on. I'm wishing you the best of luck with contest!
@Vayvaction Already said this on the discord, but thank you again for shouting me out like this! I'm still really flattered you consider my story one of your contest favourites. Also @Tubacabra , thank you for saying that! Winning is way beyond my expectations for the contest, but thank you nonet…
@caffeinatsun Finally done with your review and I'm sorry it took a while. First I'd like to say that I was really impressed by your story. The events really flowed together so I could tell there was a lot of thought put into that. You also have a level of polish here that's not common with web nov…
Oh, no worries then! I don't mind continuing to give the reviews here on the forums then. While I get started on reading again later tonight, I don't think I'll be able to get all 10 done by the end of this week in time for the AFT deadline. I hope that'll be alright with you
Same here. It's likely due to the writing period of the AFT ending in a couple of days so people are rushing to upload their final chapters. From what I heard, things were similar in towards the end of TLOT so it's probably going to be like this until Thursday when the deadline comes.
@Tubacabra Thank you for great review, and I'll keep your feedback in mind as I do my final proofreading for the AF Tourney! I'd also be more than happy to review swap the next ten chapters as well. Would you mind if we move to discord dms or some other social media for ease of communication?
@Vayvaction I recently finished reading so here's my review: I'll start with the two love interests because they are the ones you have to get right for this genre and I think you've done a great job! Together, the banter and dynamic they have are just lovely and really get you invested in their ro…
@Tubacabra Just finished my review and let me say, wow! Your writing style, specifically with some of those descriptions is just fantastic! They really suck you into the story and it was definitely a stand-out feature while I was reading. I already mentioned before that your descriptions aren't j…

@ratscout I'm so sorry for the late review! I actually finished reading a little while ago, but I only just organized the notes I took, so here is it. Praise: First, I really like the concept you have here and it's something I haven't read before so it feels really fresh. I also think the characte…
Thanks for pointing those errors out to me (because of you, I realised I've been misusing 'brought' and 'bought' so I'm really thankful for that) and I've made the changes. I'll also be sure to keep your preference in mind as I make notes for my final review.
So far, I'm really enjoying your stor…
Thanks for letting me know, and I'll be sure to look out for all of that. And with that scale, I'm looking for around a 7 with your feedback.
@Tubacabra @Vayvaction @caffeinatsun @TheSequence Hey everyone! I'm slowly getting through your works and I'll continue reading a bit every day until I get through the 10 chapters. For now, I just wanted to quickly ask what sort of feedback you were looking for? Please specify how positive or crit…
Thanks for showing interest! Don't worry about doing the review straight away, and I only ask you do it before the 24th so I can get in edits before the end of the current AF Tourney. Also, feel free to only review 6 of my episodes since you haven't got 10 yet, and I'll get started on yours as soon …
Hey @Joisarjaydeep11! I just wanted to confirm if you were interested in doing a review swap? Your original message made it a little unclear, so I wanted to make sure
@caffeinatsun I'm definitely still open to some more review swaps, so feel free to send me the link your story and I'll get started on it as soon as I can!
Hey @Vayvaction! I'm still open for swapping reviews so I'd be happy to read yours. I've just subbed to your work just to make it easier for me to find it, and don't worry about being a slow reader too much since I'll also need some time getting through everyones stories. But, if it's not too much t…
Hey @BellaTheCow! Thank you for that great feedback, and especially for bringing those grammar mistakes to my attention. I always have small mistakes like those leak through even after checking through chapters multiple times, so I'm glad you pointed that out. Anyway, I finished the first three ch…
Hey @Tubacabra! I just finished your first chapter and wow, I'm loving the descriptions of Mancer, especially his tattoos, and all the imagery you used. he one about the ‘blood dripped from his nose, teasing the bone dry ground with moisture’ really painted the scene by not just showing what’s happe…
I've just subbed to your story and I'll get started on reading through it as soon as I can! Also, thank you for the feedback here! As for your question, I think it was supposed to 'rogue strands' instead of 'rouge strands' which is a small difference but changes the meaning entirely so thank you f…
That's no problem at all, and I'd love to read over your comic! I'll get started as soon as I can

Hey! I'm almost really interested in this and I just left my first like and comment on your story. Here's mine:
Hey! I'm looking for anyone who'd be open to exchanging feedback on each other's novels. We'd like and comment specific chapter feedback for the first 10 chapters, and at the very end give overall feedback here on the forum. But, I also don't mind moving over to discord dms for anyone who'd like to …
Wanted to say a quick Happy Birthday! I think this is such a lovely idea and I'm interested in what you think of my story. I've actually already subbed to your story a little while ago because I heard great things about it, and it's one I'm excited to get around to reading soon! Another happy birth…