davidtalon
David Talon
'Shadowlands' tells the story of a dying empire corrupted by a chaotic race known as the Daemo, and the Lady Knight who is given the only chance to save it by risking everything she has fought to preserve. Told in a lyrical style where words paint the story into pictures, here you will find swords a…
Serious congrats on 100 subscribers! (and I mean that) I have...drum roll please... One. However, that one person wrote me the nicest, most uplifting message about my work, telling me how my fiction brings them joy. So, even though I doubt I'll get anyone else's interest (I ran the first episode t…
Okay, I'll bite (oops, bad choice of words) Lucy, what's your favorite food?
Hey, I'm new to the site as well and enjoying it immensely. Shadowlands is a Martial Arts story set in an alternate China, with a good deal of action, drama, and intrigue. I hope you like it, but if not, that's totally okay. Everyone has different tastes, and life's too short to waste time on someth…
Thank you for the insightful critique! The style is more 19th century, which I'm realizing isn't a good fit (and probably isn't most anywhere, anymore). I'm going to continue editing as suggested, but pull this one off in favor of a series I believe more suited to modern readers and Tapas. Shadowlan…
Thank you so much for taking the time to provide feedback. While I am serializing this series of novels on Medium and Royal Road (it's up to episode 37), I really like the positive attitude Tapas has taken, and decided to see if this might be a good fit. Specifically, is this type of story someth…