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Eliel
Brazil tapas.io/series/Two-Bodies
My name is Eliel and I'm 19 years old I can finally start creating my own world and this
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- Jan 23, '22
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I really liked your story, when I accumulate more chapters, I will read it again, I am the type that marathon the stories and well, this is my story
I'm finishing the first volume of my story and I wanted to know what do you think I should improve or would you read it without any problems
After a long time, I finally managed to make the cover I wanted and now I'm rephrasing my story. I had published it before but it contained serious errors. [image]
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hey guys, I spent some time without tapas and came back now with a new story, which is better than the other, at least has more readers and wanted to know what you think about it? could you give me your feedback? about my story
if I saw him, I think we'd get along very well, since shin is based on me, but talks about what comes to mind, but we'd get along more with Emi would be a little different as there would be two people tormenting her now so I don't know what the situation would be like
damn I need to read this lol
it reminds me that there was never a new season for hataraku mao sama and incredible progress
I'm in love with the art that has reference to pokemon
damn what amazing progress
I can not stand so long without one piece 
good that you don't suffer from having to wait a week for a new episode
as you already have a planned ending and the kind of story you are planning is quite the kind I like to write and read with a beautiful conversation we can make a great way of history to from beginning to end
one of mine also the current wano bow is very good
I had not thought of this side anymore I would not try something scary because it would be a romantic comedy and so it has this "weird" side of them I'm going to change in the third really seems strange I think I ended up exaggerating and going out of style of the story Thank you very much
thank you very much I hope I can do everything right even more so this will be my first story totally focused on romance 
for now and the unknown because it depends on the circumstance because there will be different enemies
this character reminds me of pirate captain "whitebeard" from one piece
thank you i will try my best
for some reason katherine came to my head
relax and thanks for helping me
thank you very much now i will make the relationship chart with everyone at zero this tip will help a lot and yes i will do my best so i can make them work the relationship I believe I saw the show, but what inspired me was something totally different
thank you very much I will be careful not to confuse the public and develop the relationship in due time without accelerating or extending the conclusion and don't worry they're connected to each other somehow the hard part these days will be creating cover using the mouse
Hey, I had an idea for a tale that I could write in my spare time, while I don't have time to draw my webtoon, but I don't know if I would be cool, more couples Because when I came up with the idea of the story I thought of just one girl who, whenever the boys asked to date, she made extreme req…
what time you are using it to make your comic just read a chapter and found it very good
damn it I didn't know that surprise
Sam and Edward the head came to me
I don't know why but saw me "luna" when I looked
first name that came to mind and "rey"
I found it very interesting until I was this time making a fanfic about it but not the same thing so when you do send me
I never remember my dreams I wanted your story has any idea of dreams