Always down for feedback/suggestions. I will take a look at yours as well!
Well, here goes nothing! ~
Megachurch is a horror novel about an inspector who stumbled upon the enigmatic journal of Justin Harper Lee, a young man who committed suicide on unknown reasons. Now, the inspector has jumped into a dark rabbit hole that lands him into a downward spiral filled with cultists, death, bondage, and authoritarianism.
It's skehri, ir's mystery, and it's gay! Hella gay!
My ongoing webcomic is something that grew with me. I started It when I was a kid, around 12 or 13 years old. Now, being with 24, dealing with depression, anxiety and others mental healthy issues for more than a decade, I try to show people how that life is through my boys. The struggles, confusion, misunderstandings etc that a lot of people go through and may not know how to show or express. I want to make you all valid, listened to, understood, things that not everybody had in their life. I know I hadn’t.
That’s the story of a group of teens that grew up together although it took them 15 years to start knowing each other. We’ll see how does mental health affects the lives of those kids. What do they hide behind their facades?
Saudade is a Boys Love comic.
Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule to review my work! Of course I will subscribe to your novel.
Chapter 1: I think you meant past tense instead of present tense? Yeah, I really like present tense, but past tense is much more popular, so I tend to make mistakes when I convert it. Thanks for pointing those out.
Chapter 2: I'm glad you feel that way. I want my readers to immerse themselves in the world and story, so I try to keep an eye on the characters' surroundings.
Chapter 3: It will indeed come into play later. Soon, actually.
My wrist is doing fine now. Thanks for your concern. 
Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments! I'm glad that you find both my art and my writing to be engaging!
I do go into more details of Ira and her insomnia as well as her struggles as a child in later chapters, however once this story is complete as a manuscript, I do want to go back and edit it. I plan on collecting these different comments and critics to use to help improve aspects of the story :D.
Thank you so much fren!!
I am new to creating both original comics and in a scrolling format, would help a ton if I can get some honest feedback My story is titled McBritain
If you like Scrolling format:
If you like reading in traditional layout:
https://tapas.io/series/McBritain-Manga-Layout1
I've just added a new opening scene and would love to get feedback. I can't wait to check out your novel, I've just looked at the info page and it sounds really interesting.
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As a child, Dexter was secretly taught magic. His Gran sharing her ability to see ghosts. When he became a librarian, he was prepared to ignore the allure of the magic world. Until he moved back to his haunted childhood town and learnt that old habits die hard. After an almost deadly encounter, he is forced into the local magical community. Unable to get one ghost out of his head Dexter is drawn to solving her murder with journals of the detective initially tasked with solving the case.
Thank you! I made some changes like you suggested. How's this for the kid's description? 
There weren't a lot of people —only himself and a family with a young child who looked like Cartman’s twin from the South Park TV show.
And the trip takes one hour! I put that in as well. I swear I did, but I think I mentally put it in my memory rather than writing it down! :o
I think it really helps that BL is popular on Tapas? I was worried because it isn't for pleasure only like a lot of the premium comics. Of course I'll have some steamy stuff, but there will be a plot
Personally, I think the cover helps a ton. It's the first thing people see and we all secretly judge a book for it's cover.
https://tapas.io/series/Terres4
Really want the feedback!
Hi there my comic is in the beginning stages only have up to page 10 up but its the best I can do for now,
Let me know if you like the comic or not in the comment sections!
BTW quarantine is making us all bored, especially with it lasting as long as it is now! Hopefully you're somewhere where there is phase 1 or more.
Thanks for checking my comic if you do!
If you like slice of life and a bit of mystery My comic TLC might be up your alley!
The comic is about a young girl that gets kicked out of an orphanage for her unpredictable powers and ends up getting taken in by a shapeshifter into a mish-mashed adopted family. she has to learn what it means to be herself, be part of a family, and uncover whatever the family's butler is hiding before its too late!
The comic has got aspects of modern fantasy, mystery, found family, and slice of life (as well as tiny bits of science fiction but thats far from the main focus). I'd probably rate it at PG-13 (specific Pages with PG-13 content are flagged as such in the episode tittles as well)
Heres the link if interested!
