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Thank you for the opportunity.

JTA can take a while to pick up as I originally did not write it to fit Tapas size limits. But if you happen to like it, there is A LOT of it to enjoy afterwards, and I plan on writing so much more of this series.

It is a journey after all ^^

Seems like a great opportunity, here's my novel:

Excellent! Thank you for offering to do this. I fear my horror novel is in the niche category so you will either like it or hate it.

Here's mine:
Burning Tears


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Thank you for the opportunity! Hope you'll find some novels that you like in this thread. :smile:



Thanks for the opportunity, I would love some feedback! 🖤

I've been reading Dead Souls Doing the Samba. Contrary to the name which had me skeptical I really like the story so far. I'm going to subscribe, I hope to see where this one leads me.

Thank you, glad you're liking it! I had an author in England mention it to me and it was nice that once he read the piece said he couldn't imagine a different title.

For a long time, I didn't saw any threads that would say "I will try your book". Most of the time people only just post their things :confused:

If you like fantasy stories with gangs this would be good to check at least :slight_smile:

really nice of you to do that. here is my story. hope you will enjoy it

Hi nice of you for doing this !

A World to Call My Own is excellently written. I'm only on episode 6, but you've earned a subscription for me. I recommend this book to everyone because so far its giving me gem vibes. If i didn't have so many other books to read today, I'd probably binge it.

Sure, why not? ^^


giggles i don't know what to expect so sure i give this a try

I'll say this first, you won my subscription.

Now for my feedback:
The exposition in the first two episodes felt a bit heavy. Like I was reading a text in school, you know? Its not that the information wasn't interesting, because it was and I like it. But as far as story telling I was put off a bit, I didn't immediately become interested. If not for this post being where I discovered you, I may have drifted away before the second episode.

Of course, I am impatient. Many aren't.

IMO It would feel more engaging if you kinda led me into the world mechanics slowly. Every time you said "this world" I was reminded I was reading a book, you know? Breaks the immersion for me. If you would've started the entire series by describing Diarem walking through the hallway followed by that paragraph "The worst subject for non-magicians..." then I would've instantly got caught up in the story. The expositions could have some in smaller increments as events unfolded. Just my opinion though, I'm really enjoying it so far.

I'll take that to my heart (and brain :slight_smile: )
It's my first novel that I tried writing. Hopefully, I'll get better soon.
And thank you for the subscription!

This is such a great idea thank you! I'm new to writing novels but have really enjoyed recently creating this fantasy novel. I hope you have the time to check it out as I really want some feedback. Thank you:)