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May 2020

Have any of you guys have made your characters in your comics or novels where they point out some of the flaws of your story or poke fun of how ridiculous it can sometimes get in their arc. For example:

"Is it just me or are these places always nearby by the mansion and we never bother to look in that direction?"

"either that or the writer is getting lazy about this."

"wait, what writers?"

"oh nothing. sshh he doesn't know."

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Cannot ever un-break the fourth wall.

I haven't found a place to put in breaking the 4th wall lines where it would work with the story. I may find a place in future chapters.

I have two comics where everything is almost about braking the 4th wall.

Blue from Blue Life is literally having trouble just to be inside his panels.

And The Last BL Comic is where the characters is talking about how it is to live inside a comic

I've got a couple of instances of that in my draft, but I don't think I'll keep them.

I had them in the beginning when I was pulling directly from my source material. But when I rewrote my later chapters, all of this kind of humor was written out.

Edit: Also noting, that I was really tempted to not have the Pan-Man section due to how it breaks the fourth-wall

For the love of God, Montresor.

Yes! Much of what propels my comic is based on the protagonist's ability to break the fourth wall--I've always loved when writers allow their characters to break it. Imo it just makes some stories feel more readable

Oh sorry for not asking. Is it okay to link my 4th wall comics here?

I think the closest I've been to it is this:

Alex: [explains about the existence of multiple planes of reality]
Claudia: sounds like cheap science fiction.

Claudia, my smart character, criticizing my worldbuilding. She was also overwhelmed by recent events and nervous about what was going on, so it could have been a stress joke. Haven't asked her.

I've been tempted several times, specially with the "author lazy joke", but, I guess that it will lead to some lost of emotion and adrenaline that I try to imprint in Gods VS Dragons and these are particularly difficult to create in a comic by itself, even worse with 4th wall breakings.

I never really broke the 4th wall but I did copy a meme:

I did a "wink to the audience" once.

But then Keith is the kind of person who thinks everyone's watching and applauding him, so yeah..

Here are some awesome 4th wall breaking comics.
Enjoy

Blue Life


And a spinoff

Red Life is made by the character Red from Blue Life. He have broken the 4th wall so hard that he is on Tapas with his own profile as @redfrombluelife

And here we have nothing less than
The Last BL Comic

nope, but I have exactly 1 character who breaks the fourth wall, but it's not for comedic reasons.

mainly because the fourth wall is an actual in world construct of this comic's reality.

though to be honest, I'm personally not a big fan of characters pointing out flaws in writing and not really doing anything with that flaw.

it's like pointing at an issue and not really doing anything to actually fix or play with it.
"oh look, the artist forgot to draw your sword 3 panels ago, isn't that funny?!"

this is not to say you can have a funny conclusion with this.

like, idk. what if a buff, intimidating and deadly skeleton enter screen, then the characters notice him and they immediately ridicule him for how is it even possible for a skeleton to have such a high strength stat, but instead of ending it there.

Skeleman: I have so much strength because I consume lots of milk, the calcium makes my bones thick

Warrior: no you cant do that.

Skeleman: wait what? yes I can!

Warrior: you can't drink milk, because you lack the organs needed to digest and process the nutrients in it. you're a skeleton.

Skeleman: Stunned

Warrior: you can't have strength because you lack body mass, why do you have a six-pack and biceps through your clothes? all you are is just a pile a bones.

Skeleman: his muscles slowly disappear NO STOP IT! MY MUSCLES! I CAN have muscles! it's because I drank Skelemama's milk, that's how I can drink it! Bone milk is compatible with Skeletons!

Warrior: guess what Skeleman? Skelemom is also a skeleton, she lacks breasts to lactate, and you can't even be born because she doesn't have a womb to even birth you, therefore you shouldn't even exist.

Skeleman: Begins fading out of existence NOOOOOooooooooo vanishes

XD i couldn't stop laugh at this. How to kill a powerful skeleton mob, tell it all the flaws it has. As they say, words cut deeper.

I actually haven't but for one of my stories readers regularly think I did :sweat_smile: Like, the series is about a guy writing novels and doing tasks for writing better stories and some of the narrator comments on the tasks and how he solves them may indicate something like a break of the fourth wall but, actually, it is all in the universe of the story.

Well, my narrator is a real character. In fact it is I, who present to you the translated and redrawn manuscripts lost in Time of my Litanies to Stars.