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Sep 2017

I've started making comics here a month ago. I was wondering if I can get some feedback on my work.

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The first thing I notice is your motion and expression is very good.
The second thing I notice is, we need to get you a better drawing program.

Keep drawing, yo.

I think you're off to a good start! I like the children's book feel of your mini series! My biggest critique, and it looks like you've already fixed it in your newest comic, is all the white unfilled areas around your outlines. But again it looks like it's been fixed on your newest comic, so keep up whatever you changed on that one!

Also, not too often, but every now and then your text gets a little too close to the characters. Make sure they have enough space to breath, and aren't overlapping with any of the characters outlines.

I like the character designs, especially your vulture character. Keep up the good work!

Nice! I love the storyline and storyboard. These two books could be children's story books!

I think these are perfect for a children's book; what program are you using?

And just out of curiously can you post a traditional picture up to look at; I'll have some more feedback for you based on these; but definitely, good flow in the panelling!

Aw, this is such a cute series <3 A lot of the others already said it but it really reminds me of children's story book which is nice but i think you should either try out other programs for drawing and practice coloring. But srsly this is such a cute series :smiley:

The comic looks great, really. Just needs a little bit of smoothing out, especially with the style and the narration. Maybe try to put them in boxes or something?
The colors are great, really.

Photoshop is a bit hard for me to work in so other programs I'd suggest for you to opt for might be Sai or Studio Clip
Do you use the mouse or do you have a drawing pad?

For now here's some tips for you can try on Photoshop to see immediate improvements for now:

  1. Smooth out lines
  2. Shading & Lighting
  3. Overlaying colours
  4. Use Gradients
  5. Play around with filters
  6. Show some 'brush' flow

And some either tip you can try would be to draw on paper (Traditionally) then scan in & either redraw or just colour Digitally then; this will automatically improve your line quality (no 1 of above)

There's some more I want to add but have to go, will add some more (1 or 2 stuff) when I'm back!

I like those ideas. I will look up on Sai and Studio Clip. I don't have a drawing pad yet. I have a HP notbook\laptop.

It's a pleasure, I can't remember now what was the other things wanted to say... But clearly not too important if forgot that easily :sweat_smile:

I think it was about different ways you could panel out your comic? The flow is great but I think formatting it differently? would help bring it to light for more readers. BUt what exactly was going through my head is now gone...