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Jul 2018

This thread is amazing! I'm reading through some of the reviews and learning a lot from afar. That being said, it'd be nice if you could review the first chapters of my comic. There isn't much yet, but my friend and I are just concerned about the pacing/art/paneling so far. We tried going for a "storybook" style by incorporating some traditional elements and we'd like to hear if we were successful in that regard...

Here it is!

-Art-

Got to say you have some amazing art. The sketch like line work is really good and the color give a pencil and pastel like quality making it rather unique. It also ties in well with the time period the series seem to take place in. Your proportion are on point and you really give us a nice look of the town using it in a great way for transition scenes.

I normal I leave font talk for the writing part, but I am doing it in art cause it fits more here. I know you selected one for easy reading, but it being so clean and modern clashes a bit with the art style. I think a font like https://www.1001fonts.com/im-fell-english-font.html1 might suit better. Is still easy to read, but adds a bit of imperfection (scribble like) that goes well with the sketch like art. This is a personal opinion of course, just always feel font are really important to go along with the art.

Is just for the text in speech bubble, the one use for effect fit perfectly.

Outside of the font your art is on point, the style is unique in itself, animal, town and people are all done in a great way and you have really good face expressions. As for the storybook, I do believe you nail that feeling with the art. The art doesn't give it a comic like feel even though is format like that, it feel like pages you normally go throw when reading a drawn storybook.

-Writing-

I like that you use different speech pattern on character and give 'accent' to some, make it feel like a more natural speech. I like the amount of text use, it make it easy to read and follow! The prologue is perfect in that it gives a bit of info but leave a ton of mystery and intrigue to keep one hook instead of being an info dump.

I also couldn't find find any typo or error from my reading.

-Paneling-

I can tell you plan for the vertical format from the start and achieve a great method. The panel all flow nicely and you put them in good position moving down guiding the eyes where to go which is important. Great use of black also for clearly tense moment (the crack forming and guy having the scare of his life). Keep up this vertical comic method as is working really well.

-Story-

You just started so not much I can see here, but I'll say you have a nice start in peaking one curiosity on the kid on the tree and what it means so as far as hook goes for the start of a story you did a great job!

Hope this help and you have a really good comic with amazing art!

I'm down if you can review my comic, it's short and I made some very recent improvements to the latest pages. Also the the first few pages are like years old and I didn't feel like completely redoing them, although if you think that's a good idea, I'll consider doing so

16 days later

Hey thanks for the review! I'll keep those in mind when doing future pages! :smiley: On the color subject, I'd really like to put color in my comic, it's just that I'm not fast enough yet and I don't have the time. But maybe sometime in the future...

3 months later

Hello. I would like to get a review, if you still doing them, please.
I know beforehand that my banes are human anatomy, text translation and speed of the updates. =D

Would love a review on our prologue

2 months later

Hey there ,
Can you review my story? Tell me your honest opinions. Thanks in advance.


my comic, i don't know if im outting my comic in right sorry.

1 month later

I'd really love to hear your opinions about my webcomic, yours would be the first review I ever had!

16 days later

Here's my comic. It's still quite short so there's not much to review but I'll return the favor to anyone that wants to give it a go. It's a sci-fi psychological thriller.

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5 months later

i would like to know if you could look over by comic the art gets better each chapter thanks for your help