I really like how your comic is structured and enjoy way you also educate reader first in fun comic segment and then with real-life note. Characters and your style are very cute and it makes it more appealing.~
I have a critique on lineart, through. I noticed this happening:
Bc your linework is rather thick, this makes comic look less clean and more amateur. I don't know if you're using drawing tablet or not,but this can be fixed with going over finished lineart with eraser and removing those small ends. It will make your lineart look cleaner and controlled.
I like your insight and certainly will comeback to read it till the end.~
Here is my comic, it's not as fun as your, through.