Sorry for the wait.
Since you said you're not aiming to get featured I won't critique from that angle, just in general. Also, might I say, 94 updates in the scroll format is incredibly impressive.
My first suggestion would be to use a different font-
You are bubbling great, and the font is in a fine size, but this font has some weird spacing which caught me off guard. It's a tiny detail though.
So I think your coloring is great. The backgrounds are also great. You have good paneling (though I think all the spaces in between the panels could be decreased by about 100 pixels) .. I'd say the thing I am taking the most issue with is the expressions.
Like in this scene, the zoomlines and text make this seem like it's a really dramatic moment. But the character is looking to the side, with a half-smug mostly normal face? For this kind of shot, if you want an impact you should almost always use a face-on shot (it's very intense), and make sure the expression is clear. I can't redraw it because I have no clue how to mask my style drawing faces lol, so here is an anime screenshot with a really exaggerated expression that I think has a similar tone:
Note how even the shading works to enhance the expression. putting shadows over the top of a face always will give the character a "dark" expression.
The expressions being so mild lead to a lot of confusion for me, since the main character never looks alarmed, and none of the "enemies" look like they're on a mission. It looks like this is a daily occurrence to them, as mild as getting milk from the grocery store. I kind of thought the setup was that she is constantly being hunted down, and when the enemies broke in it was like a "Lol, here we go again!" kind of thing where she cheekily taunts them and escapes easily (Like Ash and Team Rocket), but it ended up kind of being a big dramatic thing and she got captured. Making sure the characters faces, expressions, and body language match the tone you're trying to portray will go a long way.
I'm going to go ahead and skip to the latest episodes since IMO art needs the most work here, not that your art is bad at all... I think you just need to zero in on some stuff and work on improving it.
So what I think your STRONGEST thing is your coloring. Your coloring is at a very proficient level (featured level, definitely), I don't have much critique for it. But your anatomy is very off sometimes, which kind of defeats the really nice coloring. I recommend taking some life drawing, or just going outside and doing quick sketches of people walking around. Try to do some detailed muscle-maps of the body. Doing the really complicated stuff I think will help you sort of morph the skills you already have into a more proper understanding of the human body.
Good luck!
