What a read that was XD Definitely an interesting concept, with the ghost dad and apparently demonic grandma. There was even a whole nother episode when I finally came to review~
Pros: The character designs are great and memorable, and actually work very well with your style. The characters are expressive and full of life, as they always seem like they're in motion. The backgrounds are also very good, and give a consistent space for the characters to be in. The use of pink/purple lighting on page 12 of Episode 2 was very well done uwu
Cons: Each episode seems very rushed, story-wise. Almost every panel has text in it, and it never really takes a moment to breath. I would definitely recommend adding more panels with no text, and maybe just a reaction from the character or a background showing the setting off. Instead of one coherent story, each episode seems more like a oneshot that happens to happen in the same universe (if that makes sense). Every major problem for the episode is brought up, and often solved a few pages later, which makes it seem rushed.
Other: There were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but they didn't take away from understanding the comic so I won't count it as a con .3. From episodes 1 to 3, there's definitely been a lot of improvement in art! However, the story tends to follow the same formula each time, but hey! Maybe you'll switch things up in this 3rd episode.