Favorite line from your recent work?

kaiwang868 2019-02-03 01:49:36 UTC #1

Ever had that time when you come up with a line or paragraph, then a few days later you edit it and you feel like, "Damn I really outdid myself there." Then you fear you'll never be able to pull off something like this ever. again.

Share your favorite line from your most recent work below! Really curious what people will pick out

Below is mine, from my most recent work The Snow Maiden

"Girls are a book written in a different language. Some learn how to read that book and some don't. I wasn’t fluent, but I could manage a few pages."

rmdooley 2019-02-03 01:59:58 UTC #2

Thalia waxes philosophical in the most recent chapter of Legio Arcana
'That here, Creation has suffered glimpse of what it is to be damned.'

Rodimus13 2019-02-03 02:02:59 UTC #3

So, my hubby is most proud of these panels

I'm proud of writing this scene and line- this bot woke up after being on standby for 100 years. The place was trashed. He works at a campsite and was unaware ALL humans were dead and gone.

kmariea 2019-02-03 03:19:52 UTC #4

"They were glad that they weren’t the ones who needed to deal with the problem. They didn’t even have the courage to watch. Instead, many turned their backs and closed their doors."

I rather like this line I wrote This is from my fantasy romance adventure book called "The Unicorn."

KoreanTacos 2019-02-03 03:22:32 UTC #5

"Hang on, did you seriously undress me with some weird badger magic?"
-Ivolice, Ivolice and the Emissaries

ble 2019-02-03 04:35:17 UTC #6

"Then one fateful day, her clan was...

...brutaly murdered by obligatory sad backstory!"

ratscout 2019-02-03 08:07:26 UTC #7

Sometimes I write something and think it's awful and then I look at it a few days later and I'm just like, "you know, that's actually pretty good" XD

Here's a line from my recent chapter of Inheritance:

The woman was a nightmare just like she was when they met in the dream world; one moment she would be flirting with him and whispering sweet nothings in his ear, and the next she would be biting it. There was something about her wild nature that drove him crazy, and it was those feelings of impulses and passions that he always craved.

DasIstWunderblyat 2019-02-03 08:32:03 UTC #8

Please note that I'm stupid and can't write

"Part of me which is lost can't be taken back, but I can always grow a new one --even if it's not the same."
For context, it's said by a person with regenerative power who lost his memory and wants to move on.

Also:

"We have gone through a lot these weeks and I hate seeing pathetic sad people; so cakes."
The asshole said on his heartwarming birthday speech.

Rhonder 2019-02-03 18:51:41 UTC #9

"And you also pole dance? Nice."

That page is going up in an hour xD

Rodimus13 2019-02-03 18:57:05 UTC #10

Reminder: It’s almost time for the next communication window. Say hello to her for me.

You can call her my wife you know.

Hesitant statement:….No… I don’t think I can. But she is yours. Enjoy the safe time.

For the patreon lore story we did.

fatedmatescomic 2019-02-03 19:00:05 UTC #11

This isn't something I don't think I can replicate, I just love it so much lmao. It's from an RP:

“Heh- fun for you maybe,” Naty scoffed and scanned in another clothes tag. “You’ll get to have fun with a sexy young hot stud, and I’ll get stuck with bad breath Brian, odor eater Ethan, or balding Barry.”

“What about dick print, Paul?” Tristan argued. “He was a good one!”

Zaboem 2019-02-03 19:51:12 UTC #12

Here is a short paragraph I wrote for Soulless Saint.

The child Jazebel cried when she hugged the other pilgrims. She even hugged the ungiving body of the red Machine Man. The red robot told her, "Don't worry, short hairs. We'll see you when we all get to Cathedral. We'll eat red stag chili, and you can teach me how to fart."

kaiwang868 2019-02-04 04:52:19 UTC #13

Wow, thanks for all your responses. really interesting choices

simplykit 2019-02-04 05:07:11 UTC #14

this one so far... ( cause it sounds like optimus primes line - "auto bots roll out!" )

from my manga

Aetoras 2019-02-04 08:53:22 UTC #15

That is legit a great line.

Here's mine, from my novel, Athena's Chosen:

"No!" Perephon retorted furiously, "not friend, not anymore, not ever again."

Karmillina 2019-02-04 09:19:20 UTC #16

Oof, let's see... I don't take much pride in my writing skills but maybe there is something in there.

I guess "I find your style delightful, sho I shall humor you, my Lady" is sufficient XD