Free Honest Reviews (Closed)

[Alkareel]

16, there's a reason for it. And of course, I'll read 6 chapters of your story

[milejdyvan]

Okay ^^ Sounds good! Thank you for joining the exchange!

[foxnflames]

this looks great. I’d love some feedback on my story

Link of the story: https://tapas.io/series/Rise-in-the-Eas/info
Genre: LGBTQ+, fantasy, mystery
How many chapter I should read: you can do the first 8, prologue included
Explain why you need help with your story: while my MC’s “thoughts” start off simpler in the beginning (explained in the story), I’d like feedback on mechanics and structure. I’d also like to know if his “voice” is consistent in my earlier chapters. Also, when the story shifts to the village, I’d like to know if they descriptions are too much of an info dump or too vague (I’ll edit these parts later anyway).
Any other details needed: I hope the narrator of the prologue isn’t too confusing, it’s supposed to be no explicitly stated. Other than that, thanks for this!

[CodeMonkeyArts]

Haha that makes sense! Okay I get it when you mean by goals. Like a direction so to speak. Fair enough!

Oh I definitely plan on updating the story here (and on Wattpad as well). I may end up saving the older 'unupdated' version for patreon too.

But thank you so much for these tips and Hey I need to do some reading up on your tale :D. Sounds like the start of a bootiful friendship!

[domisotto]

If your offer is still opened, I am interested in knowing in what isn’t working with my book for the readers

Lone Werewolf | Tapas

[MimSS]

This idea is awesome and I read some of your finished reviews and you're really great! If you have space, I'd love for you to check out mine

Link of the story: https://tapas.io/series/3-Paths-to-Love/info

Genre: Romance, BL

Chapters: Up to chapter 4

Explain why you need help with your story: How's the pacing per scene? Also, it's a multi-pov with each chapter switching POVs and I want to get an honest review on the flow of it.

Any other details needed: It is omegaverse, with mentions of mpreg so if you're not comfortable with that, that's totally fine! But I did try not to make it too in your face or tactless, hopefully, it comes off that way

[milejdyvan]

I all of a sudden have a much larger queue than I was initially expecting... Because of this, I'll probably try to get through these sooner than once a week, but no promises! Please stay patient! Can't wait to get through to everyone.

[domisotto]

No rush! Thank you for your generous offer

[sarahmassey998]

If this is still open I recently revised my first couple of chapters (up to 15 I think) so I'd love it if you took a look at the 10 (mostly for grammar and comprehension (does it make sense)).
Thank you so much for offering to do this!

Prometheus Reanimated | Tapas

[Toastbuster]

Gederah | Tapas

Genre: Dark fantasy/mystery/adventure

How many chapter I should read: As much or as little as your heart desires. I understand that my story is not for everyone and should you find yourself bored, disinterested, or even uncomfortable, you shouldn’t feel pressured to continue. However, if you’re up for doing the whole thing I ain’t gonna complain

Explain why you need help with your story: Just general feedback is fine. What is done well and what you think can be improved on?

Any other details needed: Absolutely no rush, and I hope you enjoy!

[milejdyvan]

@sarahmassey998 @Toastbuster
Accepted.. Will be adding you to queue later.

Though @Toastbuster please choose a specific number of chapters you want me to read. I will do 10 for free, but if you what me to read the whole thing I can do that too. But in that case, we have to change it to an exchange. So if you had 50 chapters (haven't checked how many you have), you would need to read and comment on 40 of my chapters for example. Let me know when you can!

Edit: just checked your chapters. If you want me to read the whole (19 chapters) you would need to read 9 chapters of mine. Feel free to decide!

[Toastbuster]

@milejdyvan Ok! I’ll take the ten for now, and if I find the time to do a review on yours I’ll check it out! Thanks!

[grotesqueice]

@milejdyvan - Thanks to your feedback I have started revamping my episodes. Although I have only started with the Prologue episode.

I have credited you in the author's note and linked your story too. Once again, thank you and more power to you.

Revamped episode here: (I linked for reference but hey, you don't exactly need to review it again.)
https://tapas.io/episode/1948653

[milejdyvan]

I just saw it, that is so sweet of you ^^ I haven't had the chance to reread the chapter but once I get the chance, I'll take a looksie and maybe leave some nice comments this time

[Absol]

Hello! I'm relatively new to Tapas, I posted my first few chapters a couple of weeks ago. It would love it if you could add me to your queue! Although I've posted more than 10 chapters (only 12 atm but updating weekly) you only need to read 10 of them. I'm actually quite nervous about receiving feedback as I still want people to be able to enjoy it even if its only a hobby of mine and not professional, so if possible, could you please message me on here?

The title is Finding An Angel's Peace, and its a fantasy/romance genre featuring an angelic female lead and a male shifter lead. I appreciate any feedback you'll be able to give me and thank you very much in advance for taking time out of your day to provide feedback to multiple people! Here's the link for my novel, there's no rush and hope you have a good holiday season wherever you may be!

https://tapas.io/series/Finding-An-Angels-Peace

[Nin]

Hi!

Link of the story: https://tapas.io/series/Diaries-of-a-Fighter/info
Genre: thriller (with subtle supernatural elements and romance)
How many chapter I should read: 10
Explain why you need help with your story: want to see if it the story grips the reader, if it reads smoothly, if characters are strong and interesting enough

Thank you!

[neidarous]

Here's mine:
Burning Tears

Two opposite universes one with human beings born into great destines filled with magic and supernatural powers and the other with divines; creatures only exist to serve the universes of humankind. Will the two worlds clashes or it would exist within one another peacefully?

Burning Tears | Tapas

Episodes every Sunday and Wednesday.

[milejdyvan]

I have decided to close the free review thread. Everyone who has since asked for a review will be getting one but only via PM as to not bump the thread. If anyone else wants a review, please PM me and I'll see what I can do.

[Jenny-Toons]

[Jenny-Toons]

Closed on request of OP.