@ghostboy9708 Hey I really like your style! It's really cool and I love your use of color and line and shape--there's a lot of juicy movement going on. Your episodes are crazy long, which --congrats on actually getting that to fit in the MB upload limit-- I think you can split them up into 3 or 4 parts for tapas and be just fine. Like those are very long episodes, and if I were a reader clicking through from trending or elsewhere, the length would have turned me off, but other people like long episodes, so do whatever you think is best. (I personally have not figured out the riddle of the sphinx on what episode length should be)
Sometimes it's so much exciting details that I get lost, so maybe taking advantage of empty space would help me focus my attention back on action--especially since there really isn't much gutter space between panels (I would really like to see more gutter space. It helps me know what order to read things, which is important since you have a pretty abstract style)
My only other criticism is the font. Your handwriting parts are cool and I enjoyed seeing that contrast between the computer font and the handwritten font. Yet the standard font looks kinda like an emotion-less Arial-type font and you spent so long on the art, that I wish the font was a more comic-style font to match it. It also changes sizes, sometimes the bubble tails are hard to see because you do a similar line detail in the hair. Most readers on Tapas and Webtoons are reading on their phones (I'm on a monitor, so I cheated) and on a phone that font would be too small and so would those bubble tails.
But honestly, those are small things to be picky about, Your comic is a really solid sell, and a lot of work, and pretty impressive.
and for the next person in line, this is a novel--I 'finished' the comic version so the comic really doesn't need feedback, it's just I'm hella new to the world of online novels, I usually only do art, so feedback would be nice.