It needs work. Chris wants to be a hero but "why" is kinda unbelievable since this drive for being a hero would have probably happened in his childhood years regardless of his dad's opinions. Even that piece of information about his dad not liking supers is extremely tiny to the point that i thought it didn't affect Chris all that much but when he tells Golem that he didn't pursue hero stuff because of his dad, it's odd. Plus the whole "wants to be the hero, just cause" feels empty.
Anna seems like someone who kinda wanted Chris to become a hero and then does an understandable 180. But the way you presented it made it seem like Anna was against it from the beginning. You should've showed her regret letting Chris go instead of making it seem like it was all his fault.
The guild concept is presented well in the beginning but when Golem and Chris meet, it's not lengthy enough. Golem should have done more to present the Guild as something serious like the Justice League. Instead, with the short time, it made Golem seem a bit OP and the Guild unnecessary since fights with powerful people like Bruiser can just end quickly despite his upper hand moments ago.
Overall you do have good concepts but the way you're presenting them isn't enough. Being a hero for no other reason than being a hero is good but you should've presented the great things about being a hero that makes it such an interesting way of life. Anna seems like a relatable girlfriend to a wannabe hero, but you should've presented her as more concerned and regretful of her earlier support to show her change as a person even if it's a simple change. And the Guild, rather the hero concept should be expanded upon, though for now i only see a problem with your fight scenes when supers are involved. You gotta make those fights more "back and forth" with a little more thought into each action.