Have an Opinion on my character's designs?

[bluepaintcan123]

I've been working on a comic project (and rewritten it over, and over, and over and over, an-) so I wanted to create a proper design for them. These are the designs of some of my main characters.
They are supposed to be in their twenties, but please let me know if there is a problem with their design (they look too old, they aren't appealing, etc.)

[Chopythes]

I think they look really good!
Nice, noteable designs that's not gonna take for ever to draw.
I kinda feel like we all are getting their personalities told to us by just seeing them with their clothing and expressions.

(and I really love the art style too <3)

[anim8or2000]

Curtis's upper arms look very long. With arms extended the hands will end up by the knees. Jack's shoulders look a little wide ( unless he's one of those guys who's always working on his arms and neglecting leg day) the unnamed character looks really cool

[Michelle]

I like your shape design, esp on the two guys. My main critique is that they've got same-face syndrome going on. Even with a minimal approach to drawing faces, you can still inject more uniqueness into the faces. Different jaw, eye, brow shape, etc. I do think noses are a very defining feature when it comes to telling faces apart, so that makes it a little tough, but you can still do a lot with the other features.

The girl feels pretty bland right now, honestly. Her haircut is cute, and I like her figure, but her outfit is very plain. It'd be nice if we could see some of her personality through her clothing design and pose. Curtis reads as cool and confident, sorta rocker dude, Jack reads as grumpy, maybe a jock type? But I can't get much from her at the moment.

[jimena]

Oh I like the desing! your style is cute.
I already want to know them :> They do look like theyre in their 20
... um I dont know what to say haha I like them, I think the style works fine if your using any kind of palette color and cell shading.

[ISNEKO]

These look really nice. There's a very likable style here, at least to my eyes. While they all essentially have the same face, I don't feel like that matters when you can easily distinguish them with hair, outfit, and colors. I can't really say there's anything I don't like about them. I enjoy that they just have clothes that anyone would wear and they aren't over-the-top just because.

Although they remind me of the movie Osmosis Jones and I didn't like that movie at all. But that doesn't matter.

[NickRowler]

They look nice. I do agree with the same face thing that other people brought up. Noses can do a lot to add verity (but that is ultimately your style choice).

I feel the feet are also a bit small. Men tend to have larger feet, so seeing them with the smaller feet looks odd. Jack is reading more as butch woman than man (I don't know the gender of Jack...but my guess is you want them to be male) Part of it is the small feet and the line on their shirt reads as a small chest. No Name girl's neck is a tad too long. Her legs are also a little too short. Usually a person's legs (from hip to ankle) are about the same length from one's shoulders to one's groin.

[nelmathyria]

I love your use of shapes with these character designs! Overall I think they're really great and I would love to see them in color. After reading the other comments, the feet look a bit small to me too though. I think if you enlarged their feet just slightly, they'd look more balanced. Especially Curtis, his legs don't have much variation in size/thickness which I think is something his design could benefit from. I'd also be curious to see some more expressions from these guys. Neutral, similar expressions are fine for a reference like this, but make sure they can make varying expressions that fit their personalities. Oh, and they all definitely look like they're in their 20s.

[Luminosophy]

Agreed with the same face. If you had a page full of close ups I'd start having to re-read the page to ensure which character is talking. When names get removed from dialogue it gets even harder to differentiate. The saving grace at the moment is the exaggerated body shapes, but the characters could be infinitely more interesting with facial characteristics that individually define them.

[mechafeedalert]

That feet size is perfect for this style. It's is clearly larger on male than on female. That same face style only happens in the actual comic, in this design sheet I think it's different enough.
To the author, just stick to character design sheet and you're gold.

[Vanesalisa]

I like it seems pretty cool

[NickRowler]

I also think the girl's feet are too small. Personally, I don't like it when a character's feet are smaller than their hands. (Pet peeve I always had about Barbie)