Heyo, I'm planning to go back and fix up volume one of The Commune (episodes 1-46) When I say this, I mean not redrawing, but making adjustments to the drawings I already have.) This is mainly because I'd ideally like to print one day, and also because there are some glaring things that stand out to me.
Like I'm already aware that Anopheles' coat looks absolutely huge and flat early on, and that the proportions and hands could be fixed up, stuff like that. Also, there's a bit of messiness in the art and shading fixes (such as overdone blush) that can be changed.
I think it'd be good to get some feedback on what other ppl think needs fixing as readers, since I don't have that kind of perspective about my own comic. You don't have to read the entire volume for this either, the first few episodes is what I'm looking to fix up the most since it'll help new readers get into the comic.
The only thing I'm concidering redrawing from scratch is this scene:
Because it just doesn't convey what I wanted, and it looks flimsy honestly.
But yeah, feedback would be appreciated! Like the first volume will still have its issues ofc but small fixes will help improve the reading experience! (But I don't plan to redraw bc I don't mind people seeing my art get better over time 
) A lot of the first volume was a whole new learning experience, it's inevitable things are gonna look wonky and funny unintentionally 
