How can I improve this page?

[dbeirigo]

I worked on this page and would like some improvemend either on the dialogue or the art.
please your help would mean very much to me I want to do my best to evolve as an artist.

[Gladoilus]

play around with your speech bubbles to drive home the emotion

[dbeirigo]

[Gladoilus]

good that convey tone a lot better that the first one
here the hole playlist and some resource that can help you in your comic Also I use them

LavenderTowne

Scott Christian Sava

this one good for getting to know you chater better as well as not stepping on some people toes.) (note I haven't read all of your work but it is still good to know for everyone) (nor am I implying that for I know this character being drunk is a one time thing)

Tale Foundry

Writing with Jenna Moreci

Shadiversity

https://www.google.com/search?q=donald+f.+glut&oq=Donald+F.+Glut&gs_lcrp=EgZjaHJvbWUqCggAEAAY4wIYgAQyCggAEAAY4wIYgAQyBwgBEC4YgAQyBwgCEAAYgAQyBwgDEAAYgAQyBwgEEC4YgAQyCAgFEAAYFhgeMggIBhAAGBYYHjIGCAcQRRg90gEIMzAzOWowajeoAgCwAgA&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

look into the psychology of humans to help with chacter

Psych2Go

Some music to help you get into the vibe

Showing chatcer dinamic
tw(bit dark)

[dbeirigo]

some videos are no available for some reason

[Gladoilus]

try this

[Gladoilus]

the playlist is unlisted so try now

[dbeirigo]

now they are appearing

[Gladoilus]

good, hope you find it useful