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Nov 2023

I worked on this page and would like some improvemend either on the dialogue or the art.
please your help would mean very much to me I want to do my best to evolve as an artist.






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play around with your speech bubbles to drive home the emotion

good that convey tone a lot better that the first one
here the hole playlist and some resource that can help you in your comic Also I use them



this one good for getting to know you chater better as well as not stepping on some people toes.) (note I haven't read all of your work but it is still good to know for everyone) (nor am I implying that for I know this character being drunk is a one time thing)



















https://www.google.com/search?q=donald+f.+glut&oq=Donald+F.+Glut&gs_lcrp=EgZjaHJvbWUqCggAEAAY4wIYgAQyCggAEAAY4wIYgAQyBwgBEC4YgAQyBwgCEAAYgAQyBwgDEAAYgAQyBwgEEC4YgAQyCAgFEAAYFhgeMggIBhAAGBYYHjIGCAcQRRg90gEIMzAzOWowajeoAgCwAgA&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

look into the psychology of humans to help with chacter

Some music to help you get into the vibe

Showing chatcer dinamic
tw(bit dark)