Firstly I would like to say that it's not exactly my type of comic.
Setting aside my personal preference, I can see the comic is pretty good and heading in a positive direction.
You have a clear idea what you want in your characters, I can easily imagine them as real people.
The dialog feels really natural, which helps the characters feel more real/relatable.
The story concept is pretty fascinating.
I like how your destroyer of worlds turns out to be an army of warrior looking dudes instead of some freaky alien. Good touch there (not saying you can't have freaky aliens it just stands out more that her first fight was with someone so human looking)
You have improved greatly from the first page to your newest one. Coloring, characters, backgrounds, and body language have all improved.
The plot's pretty solid and straight forward. Bad guy wants to blow up worlds. Magic little creature appears. Gives protagonist kick ass powers. Adventure ensues. But I love the way you are going about it. Ivolice is sassy, but not mean. Cares about her family (a massive plus for me) and just seems like a nice girl to go on this crazy adventure with.
Now for my personal favorite thing to study about comics. Body language. Your characters body language is great. I can see where it needs improving but you are already going in the right direction, as long as keep at it, it will only improve.
The action scenes could use a little more work, I bit more mobility in their movements, but over all pretty good. I could see your style improve as they fought.
Over all a great comic, that is gaining some decent attention. As long as you stick to your story, keep your characters making decision that they would make (and not what just happens to be convenient for the plot) your comic will only get better and better.
I wish this was around years ago when I was super big into magical girls. I would have been one of your biggest fans.
Keep up the amazing work!