Great writing as always.
I think these kind of stories overgo my intellect, since my neurons start working only while I'm reading Berserk.
Some things that got my attention we're the drop-off, off epithets, I don't mind them, but maybe for other readers, yk?
And maybe I didn't pay enough attention while reading trough and trying to fully read the names, but I think you told a marriage story right from the beginning.
The readers may ask themselves: Why do I need to gain interest in their marriage; or, who are these characters that are getting married, or something like this.
Maybe my brain is just too rusty for these kind of classic type of stories, I don't really know.
Anyway, cute start and nice cover ;3