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Jan 2022

Can you check my new series out, it is horror and I have never done horror before.

I would like some feedback for my work.

I love a good review with friendly constructive criticism! I see there's a lot of posts here already, but if you ever get to mine i'll be forever grateful lol. Check it out if you want to read/review my apocalyptic Sci-fi story!

The first one's a slice-of-life novel reminiscing school days as the normal days as adults go by and the second is a collection of short stories-

Just tell me what you feel about the works! Any constructive advice is also most welcome!
Take your time and thanks for this thread!

Ooh, could you review my comic strip series? It'd be worth my while and give me a boost for the new year:

I can't really afford a beta reader and my brother won't read this until it becomes a comic because he's deathly afraid of words.

This is my novel 'Broken Hearts'

I'm currently reworking on it and any feedback would be greatly appreciated :slight_smile:

Hello there, thanks for the offer, if you're still giving feedback I would like exactly what you offered, your honest thoughts about the story since I want to know its flaws so that I can fix them and make the story better.

Also, the story is Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, and probably there isn't anything that needs any content warning.

Hello, great to know that you review creators' and writers' work and I would feedback on my webcomic. This is to get an unbiased opinion so as to know the flaws and any inconsistencies that may trouble it.

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Reincarnated as the third prince of one of the continents human empire. Raoul and his mother were set up and killed by his father in a plot to gain more power. however he somehow survived and woke up in a Dungeon where he has been sleeping for a year since his death. when the reason for his death is clear he sets his goals and embarks on his own Journey to right the wrongs of his family and revenge for his mother.
Link: Emperor of the Dungeon : https://tapas.io/series/Emperor-Of-The-Dungeon

Hiii, I’m new and this is my first time posting on a Publix platform like this so would just like some generic feedback and critique of you don’t mind :smiley::smiley:

Just trying to get through life with the occasional bout of anxiety, depression and substance abuse. It’s ok though I’m not a bad person you just don’t know me.

https://m.tapas.io/episode/2276495

Hey, there! Thanks for this thread. Here's my novel. I'd love to hear your thoughts, positive or not! Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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