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Jan 2022

I can't really afford a beta reader and my brother won't read this until it becomes a comic because he's deathly afraid of words.

This is my novel 'Broken Hearts'

I'm currently reworking on it and any feedback would be greatly appreciated :slight_smile:

Hello there, thanks for the offer, if you're still giving feedback I would like exactly what you offered, your honest thoughts about the story since I want to know its flaws so that I can fix them and make the story better.

Also, the story is Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, and probably there isn't anything that needs any content warning.

Hello, great to know that you review creators' and writers' work and I would feedback on my webcomic. This is to get an unbiased opinion so as to know the flaws and any inconsistencies that may trouble it.

8 days later

Reincarnated as the third prince of one of the continents human empire. Raoul and his mother were set up and killed by his father in a plot to gain more power. however he somehow survived and woke up in a Dungeon where he has been sleeping for a year since his death. when the reason for his death is clear he sets his goals and embarks on his own Journey to right the wrongs of his family and revenge for his mother.
Link: Emperor of the Dungeon : https://tapas.io/series/Emperor-Of-The-Dungeon

Hiii, I’m new and this is my first time posting on a Publix platform like this so would just like some generic feedback and critique of you don’t mind :smiley::smiley:

Just trying to get through life with the occasional bout of anxiety, depression and substance abuse. It’s ok though I’m not a bad person you just don’t know me.

https://m.tapas.io/episode/2276495

Hey, there! Thanks for this thread. Here's my novel. I'd love to hear your thoughts, positive or not! Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

16 days later

Give it your all:

here's mine , give as much harsh criticism as you can!

Here's my comic. Feel free to check it out and let me knoe what you think:

Auster

Action / Urban fantasy / Sci-fi

To get back his memories and avoid being alone Dasch will join a War
between secret organizations. But can this socially anxious kid survive
in a world in which people develop powers from their trauma and suffering?

13 days later

If you don't mind a novel here's mine THANKS!

Here is my comic if you still have time to review. Any feedback and constructive criticism is welcome! :smiley:

1 month later

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