19 / 71
Nov 2015

Okay, first things first HOW DO YOU NOT HAVE MORE SUBSCRIBERS.
Seriously dude, your comic is awesome and I haven't seen it anywhere yet. Start shamelessly plugging yourself, no one will really mind that much. (Maybe start a forum thread for other users to share their surreal fantasy comic?)

Also, this review is only based on the first two episodes as my internet is too slow for your comic frowning Sorry!

Storytelling:
The grammar is a little choppy and the dialogue can feel a little forced at times but I see that English isn't your first language so I would recommend finding someone who could read over your dialogue before you post it to check for any obvious errors.

I also noticed that the text went from typed to handwritten and then to a third font in the middle of the first episode, I would recommend keeping to the first typed font, the handwritten and second one are hard to read when coupled with the fancy speech bubbles.

I really like the description for your series, it's very intriguing and is probably one of the best I've read.

I sometimes feel like I need a little more information about what is going on so I would suggest having a bit of text narrating as well as the speech bubbles.

You've got some good humour there too!

Art:
Oh my gosh the ART. IS. AMAZING. It puts me in mind of tarot cards and old Celtic illustrations.

Your proportions can be a little off at times, I would recommend keeping character sheets of poses for your characters so they keep the same proportions throughout your comic.

Your character designs are beautiful!

The colours that you use are really beautiful, they flow really smoothly through the panels, giving your comic quite a majestic feel.

Your borders are really gorgeous and unique, but I'd recommend using plain ones (or at least less detailed ones) occasionally so that they don't distract from the rest of your artwork.

Also, just take a moment to applaud yourself for your amazing shading.

Your Webcomic as a Whole:
Can be slightly hard (only slightly) to follow at times but no one really cares because your art is so amazing. blush You've got some good reader-creator interactions going on so just keep plugging your comic and doing what your doing!

62 points! And a llama! (points are irrelevant and completely unrelated to each other but I thought I'd put them here anyway)

Okay, I've got a lot of responses to this so far and the reviews take a while to make up so I'll definitely review all of the ones above this post but I may not get to the ones after it. Just letting you all know.

It's barely started, but if you have the time, I would definitely love to hear feedback for the comic I just recently started : Set to Zero2. Thanks! :

Hmmmm I am rather bad at self promoting! though I would like to read more surreal fantasy comics I might do that!

yeah I will agree my English isn't great but I got better! also yeah I also agree with the dialogue! also yeah my font choices in the beginning are rather bad I will agree! I am planning to redo more of my first pages so there isn't anymore hand written font!
Well it is good to know you find the synopsis good! I had great difficulty creating a good one! Yes I have problem with giving more information on the situation! I will try to rectify that as much as I can!
thanks!

heheh thanks again! well I do love Celtic! Yup in the beginning I had troubles keeping the proportions! I changed that later on! yeah I made character sheet now!
Thanks again!
again thanks! I am glad my coloring pleases you!
I will keep that in mind when it come to borders!
again thanks!
I will try to get better at making the story clearer! I will try to plug in my comic more! I am not sure how well that is going to go!

Hi there, If you got time please check out Super-Dud
Issue #1 is complete here on Tapastic. Issue #2 is currently been uploaded every Monday. Page 11 of issue 2 has been uploaded today.
Thanks.
I look forward to hearing what you tink smile

Sure ( : I know it's quite a lot to read~

I am coming to the end of season one of Talesfromswipecity1 so I would be interested in a review if you are up for it. there are no sex scenes but there is some tastefully done female nudity, and some scenes of punishment (none nude). I think you would enjoy the story

My comic is Kindred Sun!2 I don't have a lot yet, but if you could tell me the feel you're getting from it so far, and if it seems interesting, I'd appreciate it! I'll do the same for you, if you like :3 That goes for any of you guys, really. I love reviewing stories of any type. <3

Hahaha that's a great reaction gif! PM me if you want, and maybe we could review eachother's when I get off work? I'll look yours over and tell you what I think. What are you looking for? :3

Wow. you do impressive reviews. Lots of details!
When you start this kind of topic you could be overwhelmed with the number of responses.
You might be starting a waiting list real soon... wink

If you still have space/motivation to have a look at my comic Shades Of Men,
that would be awesome!

Thanks! Good luck!