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Jul 2018

hey all!

so I'm designing a character for a comic I might do, and I need your guys' help. first, some facts about her...

-she's very sweet, with a vague air of sadness about her
-she lives during the 1900s
-she works in an orphanage and tries to bring some light into the lives of the children there. very motherly

here's the designs:

which of the designs is better? and what can I do to improve it? thanks so much!

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This looks great! :smiley:

I'm personally a fan of the design on the right - the cross on her dress makes it immediately apparent she has the role of some kind of care-taker. I also think having her ears out allows you to focus more on her face, drawing you to her expressive eyes.

Also her feet/hooves on the right appear to be more split (a cloven hoof). Just a personal preference but I prefer that design better! Just looks cute. :smile:

Great work!

thanks for posting :smiley:

yeah, I do feel like the cross on her dress shows her character more. and good point about the ears hahahaha

I am a wee bit attached to the first design, personally. maybe I could add aspects of it to the second design? or maybe have it as another outfit she wears...

thank you so much for the advice!

I prefer the first design personally. Design wise one isn't really better than the other, but the shrug is super cute. The red cross makes me think of a nurse, and I imagine it would have that association for most, which is something to be aware of. Both versions are cute, though!

personally i like both they look like different ranks of nurse.
remember to a a small watch a tool that all nurses would be lost without.

(and do the kids make jokes about counting the nurse if they can't sleep?)

thanks everybody!!!

I definitely think the second design is more successful in conveying who she is. but the shrug seems to be well received so maybe I'll keep that

here's what I came up with based on your guys' critiques...kept the shrug and the cross and have her ears be out of the way

I'm liking the newest design but now the cross looks awkwardly placed. Maybe you could have that be the pin holding the shrug together?

I like the second design a bit better, it gives her more of a clear shape.
However, you definitely should look up skirt lengths, they only went up during/after WW1 and didn't just have an apron without anything underneath. Take actual clothes from that period as reference! In case you need some, here's a link: https://www.pinterest.de/bookofwit/1900s-1910s/2

thanks for the advice! yeah, I think I should do more in depth research hahahaah

the story she's in takes place during ww1, so I'll definitely do more research on that period