New to this, Please review

sixmonthstolife 2016-09-09 01:37:07 UTC #1

Hi Everyone,

I'm very excited to be joining your community! My web comic series is brand new and I'm still trying to figure things out. I've posted a few episodes on my page, I'd love it if I could get some constructive criticism from you guys...
Please take a look and let me know if I'm heading in the right direction.

https://tapastic.com/series/sixmonthstolife

A big thank you in advance! ^_^

MidZM 2016-09-09 01:51:25 UTC #2

You're comic is quite cute, out of the 5 episodes posted I found my self chuckling at a different part of each one. The style is simplistic but because of the nature of the comic it tends to work for it, it reminds me of the ASDF movies in that way.

I do find it funny but out of the 5 I saw I didn't feel like I had any incentive to continue reading except to see the ending, and since the episodes are so short that's easy to do, if they were longer I don't know if I would finish them due to that point.

But welcome to the growing world of Tapastic, I hope you enjoy your stay

SirGutsalot 2016-09-09 02:24:51 UTC #3

I really like your sense of humour and your style which really compliments the comic! You've just begun so I can't comment too much but it left a really good first impression so I've subscribed!
Have fun on Tapastic!!

myga 2016-09-09 11:56:06 UTC #4

I enjoyed all 5 episodes and smiled at least once with each one. Well done!
The simple art if perfect for the purpose of the comic and gives the whole story a nice day-to-day taste.
I liked how characters are presented - minimal but just perfect facial expressions, just the right amount of words being said. Tessa's monologue in "boop!" is a work of art in it's own rights!
Loved the movie titles on Nutflix!

Just a tiny "but" - I am not sure if that was on purpose or not, but Jake looks much, much older than Tessa and it gave me an ever-so-slight cringe. Not judging, though

sixmonthstolife 2016-09-10 04:15:14 UTC #5

Thank you so much to everyone that took the time to have a peek and review! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

@myga Jake is actually just two years older then me and I just turned 32 on the 2nd of Sept. Perhaps it's his blonde hair... which we depict with no colour in the comic since it's simply black and white. Loved that constructive comment as we didn't quite see it that way.

To everyone with sweet comments and constructive help – a big THANK you – we truly appreciate you taking your time out to have a look. We hope you enjoy more of what's to come.