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Thanks, I notice that in chapter 3 (haven't publish it yet) and been trying to make it flow right to left. I am used to mangas and sometimes did it left to right out of bad habit. I seen most are right to left here so trying to keep it this order.

Thanks for the feedback! Is very appreciated!

Hello, welcome to Tapas. I took a look at your comic, my biggest issue with it was a number of spelling and grammatical issues. You might want to have someone look over your outlines for you and help you fix things like that, it's pretty distracting to me at least. Ruins the flow. Beyond that, you're working on a comic and that's the first step. It's obvious you're a fan of anime given the plot, but there's nothing wrong with that there's definitely a fan-base for that obviously.

My comic:

@diegoppyoja A rock being the hero, crazy idea but till now seems funny! :smiley:

@franzvanderlinde Really like your color style!

@fleetinginfinity Concept sounds interesting and art does hone in that this is not a happy 'power' to have! Thank you for the information on the grammar. I did have someone but the person couldn't do it on time and I didn't want to keep pushing back when I start release...heck I am still waiting for his notes. I'll check it out and update any mistakes I find myself and try to find someone else to read the ouline.

Welcome to Tapas. You'll find your bearings the longer you use the site. Keep working and you'll learn and improve. My sis and I work together on our comic and we've been using Tapas for about two months. It's a fun place.:grinning:

Wow, I actually checked your comic from other forum post and subscribe xP The prelude paints an epic battle between different nations with different abilities (or no abilities in case of the Exhalo) which got me intrigue. Thanks for the kind words, I hope to be able to keep improving in coloring and in writing the more I do it!

Never tried sketch up, but if it helps with doing backgrounds I really do need that!
I'm creating Psychosis, it's a manga inspired webcomic

hi! i write spire! its about vampires who go on an adventure to find a way to be human again

i recommend tracing over your sketchup models, it'll give you a start to figuring out backgrounds!

Thanks, I do plan to move from sketch up to drawing them. I used it to test it out and speed up a bit my release. But after chapter 4 I plan to do them myself or at least work to do them xP Man your comic is amazing! Love how you do the eyes!

Thanks, I really appreciate your feedback. Glad your enjoying the build up and hope you enjoy the story. Practice will always help improvement. That's something I've learned along the way.

Thanks, will check out the short stories (began reading a bit of Jennifer, but sadly have to put in hold cause of needing to clean something or ants will make a party!) Added to library! :slight_smile:

Please check out my comic, would be nice to get the opinion from a short story writter :smiley:

Sketchup is great. I remember using years ago. I am neither an artist not an architect, but I did create a very town map for an RPG book in Sketchup. My plan was to release the map file with the ebook edition so the gamers could view their town from any angle. The project went nowhere, but the software is fun and fast to use with a learning curve that is not too steep like say Photoshop. I could see an architect using Sketchup to make a quick first draft model before using pro software for precise and detailed blueprints.

Hi welcome to Tapas. The more you use the site the more you get used to it. I really like the attempt you are doing with your comic. I don't have a comic to share but I do have two novels if you would like to check out.

Strangers

An Automaton Journey

I read strangers, you want people to cry? xP Such a sad ending, but I like that you use a subject that many ignore (suicide). Now if you excuse me, I need to dry my eyes cause of onions...yeah onions.

Your comic seems interesting and I'll check it out tomorrow during my layover while I'm traveling since I'll have some time!

I've included mine if you'd like to give it a look! =)