5 / 9
Feb 2023

I will start with the fact that you only published 3 episodes and that's too early to expect much of a following and thus, comments.
While the genre states the novel is Fantasy, after 3 episodes I still see no hints of it being a fantasy whatsoever, even the blurb shows no hints of it, so... that's just one thing the readers may wonder about too.

Just asking, but, is English your first language? I'm not trying to be rude, I just want to know.

I feel you. It's important to get feedback- most people think about this only in the form of purely constructive feedback, but being told what is good about it, as well as any thoughts or opinions is helpful too.
I also suffer from a critical lack of feedback of any kind and it leaves me constantly just wandering in the dark by the light of my own candle. Random one offs are hard not to take too seriously because I have nothing else to go off of! It drives me insane!!

Besides what others have said I just think things move too fast for people to want to slow down enough and provide the littlest of input.

Comments & Likes don't seem to come easy here. You shouldn't judge your work by those two indicators.

I would take this part out of the summary: "[It is a fresh and completely unexplored story]
[I warn the readers that if you read the story, than you risk your heart being crushed with pain.]"
The summary should focus on what happens in the story. Don't use the summary to tell readers how they will react to the story.

I read the first chapter. It might help if you describe the setting a bit more - where are they? what time period?

Some of your word choices could be better. For example "upperclassmen" is used for students. Upperclassmen are the older students in a higher grade level than you. As Shilpi is not a student, this isn't the word you need.

Like others mentioned before, you just started and have 3 episodes. Novels are about self promotion 90% of the time. Don't expect to be a big hit wonder just by writting. Writting is just 10% of the work you must put.

That being said Fantasy is your main genre so many people will expect adventures. You also used the genre slice of life.
You may want to rethink which is your main genre according to tapas public.

This will be hard even I don't fully get where my novel will fit (as main genre) but I plan to ask for advice once I upload it.

Note: Judging by your summary I would say your main genre should be slice of life followed by mystery (or vice versa) and then fantasy (if there is fantasy?)

1 month later

closed Mar 9, '23

This topic was automatically closed 30 days after the last reply. New replies are no longer allowed.