Enjoy friend!
Hello, welcome to tapastic!
It would be an honor and privilege to receive your feedback and insight
(I just ask you patient with the older art in chapters 2 and 3, it is being redone)
Welcome to Tapas~! I hope you'll enjoy your time here 
My comic Pandemonium is a fantasy/horror that features demons and the seven sins, do check it out if that interests you, I'd love to hear your thoughts~ ^^
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Burn My Shadow is a dystopian comic book created and written by Lanza Sebastiano, pencilled by Conti Fabio, inked by Bert and Miriam Scaringella.
The year is 2113. Global political and economic stability has been upset by extreme weather conditions, as well as an ever-growing population. Tharmas is an outcast in search of his long-lost sister. In spite of his objections, he begrudgingly accept K's company, a child journeying alongside him.
The search leads Tharmas and K through the megalopolis speckling a predominantly arid wasteland. Cauldrons to diverse cultures, the urban complexes, shielded from extreme weather events by gargantuan domes, house the better portion of the world population. Food and water reserves are scant; electronic masks, serving as IDs and credit chips, are provided amongst the wealthy.
The journey will bring Tharmas face to face with the new world's leading figures; he will avail himself of violence as he investigates his sister's whereabouts, whilst his relationship with K will delve deeper into his individuality.
Hey, howdy, welcome to Tapas! It's pretty decent around here all things considered; lot of great comics to read! If you wouldn't mind, it'd be pretty cool to hear some thoughts about what I'm drawing over here?
If you like fantasy and action, please check out our comic:
Any comments are always super appreciated!! <3 <3
This is my first comic with long story, so not sure if it's too slow, boring or what, but... here it is! 
I just posted chapter 1 of Supernaturally vol.1. Like many creators, mine steadily improves as the story carries on, but everything begins somewhere. Here ya go!
Wow, lots of replies. (Thanks for the nice welcome messages! 
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Imma get started with my comments.
@BobbyjoeXforgotensb
There's a kind of sitcom energy to your comic. The banter between characters is pretty hilarious, especially between Oliver and Daniel. I like how they immediately get off on the wrong foot with each other and they can't seem to help running into misunderstandings from there, but they totally mesh personality-wise in my opinion.
I think that comic artists can generally be viewed as "illustrators-at-heart" or "animators-at-heart". This doesn't necessarily mean that you'd want to be an illustrator or an animator, it's just to describe how you approach things. The illustrator types are concerned with composition and creating an immersive scene, while the animator types are more concerned with motion and the flow of characters interacting. You're definitely more of the animator type. You use a lot of dynamic angles in your panels. The sense of coordination between panels is pretty good, so it's easy to get into the zone when reading.
You have a tendency to consider details that most people would miss, which is a charming feature of the comic. Like when Junior was trying to run while wearing sandals and they kept sliding off of his feet and tripping him, I lol'd at that, it's completely relatable. This even shows up with random background details, like in Chapter 1 when Junior's brushing his teeth, the toothpaste tube is kind of scrunched up instead of looking like a generic full tube. They're small details, but it gives personality to the art.
@vothnthorvaldson
I was surprised at how much variation there is in the background details. It seems like very flower is of a different type, and every cloth has a different hue or texture. It's an neat aesthetic.
There's a sort of balanced and cerebral style to the writing. The characters all feel like they have an inquisitive spark in their personalities. They're not just "acting out a role" within the story, they question things that real people would be curious about. Zerwan in particular comes across as being very thoughtful, which is an interesting trait for such an energetic and idealistic person.
It's a fairly wordy comic, but it never felt like a chore to read. In fact, I was able to settle into reading it pretty easily. The tan speech bubbles are an excellent design choice! I feel like ordinary white speech bubbles would visually shatter the page since your art makes such extensive use of earth tones, but tan drastically softens their impact to the point that they don't detract from the art at all.
(Expect more comments soon!)
