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DiegoPalacios
Oct '19

Hey there! welcome to Tapas!

here is my comic:

sarrowsmith10
Oct '19

If you like fantasy and action, please check out our comic:

Any comments are always super appreciated!! <3 <3

skeelecamm
Oct '19

This is my first comic with long story, so not sure if it's too slow, boring or what, but... here it is! :blush:

XxKonspiracyxX
Oct '19

I just posted chapter 1 of Supernaturally vol.1. Like many creators, mine steadily improves as the story carries on, but everything begins somewhere. Here ya go!

chaoticlolcat
Oct '19

Wow, lots of replies. (Thanks for the nice welcome messages! :kissing_cat:)
Imma get started with my comments.

@BobbyjoeXforgotensb
There's a kind of sitcom energy to your comic. The banter between characters is pretty hilarious, especially between Oliver and Daniel. I like how they immediately get off on the wrong foot with each other and they can't seem to help running into misunderstandings from there, but they totally mesh personality-wise in my opinion.

I think that comic artists can generally be viewed as "illustrators-at-heart" or "animators-at-heart". This doesn't necessarily mean that you'd want to be an illustrator or an animator, it's just to describe how you approach things. The illustrator types are concerned with composition and creating an immersive scene, while the animator types are more concerned with motion and the flow of characters interacting. You're definitely more of the animator type. You use a lot of dynamic angles in your panels. The sense of coordination between panels is pretty good, so it's easy to get into the zone when reading.

You have a tendency to consider details that most people would miss, which is a charming feature of the comic. Like when Junior was trying to run while wearing sandals and they kept sliding off of his feet and tripping him, I lol'd at that, it's completely relatable. This even shows up with random background details, like in Chapter 1 when Junior's brushing his teeth, the toothpaste tube is kind of scrunched up instead of looking like a generic full tube. They're small details, but it gives personality to the art.

@vothnthorvaldson
I was surprised at how much variation there is in the background details. It seems like very flower is of a different type, and every cloth has a different hue or texture. It's an neat aesthetic.

There's a sort of balanced and cerebral style to the writing. The characters all feel like they have an inquisitive spark in their personalities. They're not just "acting out a role" within the story, they question things that real people would be curious about. Zerwan in particular comes across as being very thoughtful, which is an interesting trait for such an energetic and idealistic person.

It's a fairly wordy comic, but it never felt like a chore to read. In fact, I was able to settle into reading it pretty easily. The tan speech bubbles are an excellent design choice! I feel like ordinary white speech bubbles would visually shatter the page since your art makes such extensive use of earth tones, but tan drastically softens their impact to the point that they don't detract from the art at all.

(Expect more comments soon!)

Anithia
Oct '19

Ok, i want the random coments, honestly im expecting something funny lol

TheBlankScroll
Oct '19

I'd love to know what you think!

fnflgbtcomics
Oct '19

Sounds cool! Here's mine. :slight_smile:

vothnthorvaldson
Oct '19
chaoticlolcat

Thank you! That's some very interesting comments, some of them I never heard before. I feel you understood very well what I was going for with this comic, which is very pleasing for a creator. Great feedback to get! Thanks for reading and for the observations!

rosannalamantiarlm
Oct '19

Here's mine, It's about Lilith and the fallen of Lucifer

aspiderjonny
Oct '19

You've peeked my interest, good sir. I'm curious what you'll say about Undefeatable J-Man.

appleandtangerine
Oct '19

It's all flash and no substance rn but an exposition episode is coming soon

marilyntoonweb
Oct '19

I started uploading it here on Tapas, but the full version of the story can be found on Webtoon! it's my first time working on a comic and some feedback would be very helpful! :smile:

jensrichard77In the making of Bunneh The Rabbit
Oct '19
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If you still looking for something to read. Her is something different and cute

TheBlankScroll
Oct '19
AmandaJ-art

I poked through your stuff for just a second, I really like your character designs and technique. I'll try and read more at some point.