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So I remember back when we used to have loads of these threads going around and I haven't seen one for aaaages, so why not do one myself?

After all I've got a new novel so it's back on the grind to build up that visibility.

So the game is, I post a word and you post a passage from your novel relating to the word. Then, you post another word for the next person, and they must post a passage relating to that word. And so on!

To encourage engagement, because I'm sure we're all sick of link dumps, do yourself a favour and say something about the passage above you. Talk to fellow creators, engage - you might run into something interesting.

So someone gave me a word to start, and that word is: Flight

Which gave me a super sappy passage that I love:

“I know, Ella,” Cain murmured, “and if it means so much to you, I hope you can imagine how much it means to me.”

She nodded, no more words as she rested her head once again against his shoulder. This time, in a burst of bravery, he leant back so he could wrap his arm around her waist. With a deep, contented sigh, she snuggled into the crook of his arm like the spot had been made for her. Pigeons took off in a flight of grey and green across the cityscape, and as somewhere in the distance, a choir began to sing, he pulled her in tight and decided that perhaps the entirety of him had been created solely to love her.

If only she’d been made the same way.

And for the next person, post a passage that relates to the word: Metal

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:cry_02: why do you keep doing this to Cain. I love the atmosphere of this :heart_03: so quaint and cute. The little music in the back and them snuggling then you tear it all to bits

Metal :smug_01: here’s mine

Darzsa waited at the corner to cross the street. He’d gotten off course too many times from enjoying his leisurely afternoon. Metal smashing into the ground rang out, eliciting gasps from those around Darzsa. Hastened tones filled in the blanks for poor Darzsa; he was through with commotions behind him.

Some of the roughnecks with their heads in the clouds missed the rivets embedded into the pavement, smoldering metal fading to black upon impact. Darzsa unfurled his sketchbook and faced the calamity behind him. Mere feet from where he spoke with Lottie was littered with compact craters, asphalt now rubble. All Darzsa saw when he blinked was an ugly dress and that devilish smile.

Next word is lock

What a passage :fearful: there’s so much going on and Darzsa still seems so calm :sip:

He couldn’t stop smiling as he walked to his next class, feeling like something was finally going right.

He stepped into a stairwell and the hair on the back of his neck stood up. He tried to catch the door but just missed it as it closed with a definitive click. His heart rate accelerated as the door above him opened and Jake realized with startling clarity that he had just walked into a trap.

Next word: breath

Oh no! Jake!! :sob: :sob:

When Insoo’s nostrils flared and stared at him, Myungsuk’s body moved on its own. He stood on his toes and gripped his fingers around Insoo’s shirt, pulling them closer. Insoo’s breath tickled Myungsuk’s lips and down his neck, fueling the warmth inside him.

Myungsuk fluttered his eyes closed, puckering his lips as Insoo drew in, closing the gap between them.

Next word: Heels

Ohhh wow...that's a steamy kiss. I love it :heart_03:

From a future update. A preview if you will:

He blinked, looking back up at the sky, frowning slightly. The clouds were ganging up on the sun, blocking it’s rays from touching their skin. He winced seeing the shadows creeping over them, the sky becoming overcast, “Well, so much for a nice walk.”

“What are you talking about?” Ira turned back to him, her sultry voice delicate, not wanting to break the comfortable quiet of their journey, “It’s beautiful. The wind feels good.” She jumped off the path, kicking off her heels and giggling. Her toes dug into the grass and she sighed, her voice like silk in the wind, playing with the floating leaves from a nearby tree. “It’s been a long time since we enjoyed ourselves like this!” She held out her hand again, hopeful that this time, he would take it.

Next word: Heart

The scene feels light-hearted. It is very nice how you describe the situation, the voice, and with the body movements.


Part 7:

His mauve eyes gazed at other people with the same shade of irises. The connection was as far as his heart from his hometown, closely disconnected. He should be one of them, he was one of them, but he could never be with them. As in dogs: probably the same separation between pedigreed pets and mongrel strays, yet do those animals know why or who they are?

Part 9:

Kôra's breathing was deep and hurried, his right chest was pounding. The heart is supposed to be more left-aligned as the boy had learned about. Strangely to him — in these anxious times, the unpleasant cold always started on the right.


I will try to use simple word I use multiple times as the next word: Retaliation

That’s intense! And I like how both relate to the word in different contexts. And then, in response, here’s Mr. Jonathan retaliating against Nod’s brother.

I rolled my top hat down my arm and slid a straight razor down each sleeve. The Righteous Reverend Abraham Cain was laughing.

"He'll never stop me. I will kill him. Because I am real and he never was," Abraham was saying.

I raised my blades, crouching low.

"You're a cheap magician. Will of the Lord Adam. You're a psychic, just like your father, just like your brother," I growled

"I am nothing like my brother," Abraham boasted

"We will die before you will hurt him again."

Abraham smiled serenely. "So be it."

I was moving before he could focus on me, coming off the wall to the right, under his gaze. The wall exploded behind me, showering me with slivers. I drew a line below his kneecap with one hand, opened a gash in his arm with the other.

"The Lord Adam forgot to protect you today," I said.

I was still moving, sweeping for his spine, but an elbow met my temple. Adam turned on his heel and planted a foot against my jaw. I was in the air, spinning, hitting the ground and losing two teeth.

"Not just my mind has been Upgraded, figment. My body as well."

The next word is weep.

@foxnflames this scene gives me chillssssss, such a near miss from such a regular event! poor darzsa :cry_02:

@kmlangleyauthor goddamn, you got such a scary scene out of that prompt - the gut drop moment when jake realises he's trapped :fearful:

@MimSS :heart_03: THIS IS ADORABLE

@CodeMonkeyArts there's some lovely description in this :hohoho: ira isn't going to let cloud ruin her day out :triumph:

@diamondpowder both of these have a real big sense of othering to them, like kora feels disjointed from the world around him in two different ways. It'd be nice if you added something about the post above you to keep some engagement going though :eyes:

@thetalentedmrwulf yo he wrecked that guy :joy: totally successful retaliation there

Glad to see this thread back!

And lovely action sequence @thetalentedmrwulf ! :smile:

“Y-Yeah.” Kyler’s eyes fluttered open. Her throat dried up as Ray’s last words stuck with her like a barbed-wire encircling her heart. When she spoke, her voice dropped to a whisper. “And that women were disgusting tramps.”

Valerie froze. Her lips pursed into a thin line. “He said that?”

The menace in her sister’s voice chilled her veins. Kyler could only nod. But more than Val’s anger, the dripping contempt in Ray’s words made her shrink further into her shell. Admittedly, she had dreamt of having sex with Ray before. But first, she wanted to have a relationship with him that went beyond friends. She wanted to hold his hand, hug him, cuddle with him. Was it so wrong of her to want that?

The corner of her eyes prickled again with tears. She bit her trembling lips as sobs wracked her body. She barely heard her sister say “I think I get what’s happening.” When a pair of arms wrapped around her, she leaned into the embrace and wept her heart out.

Buried in her sister’s chest, she felt a sense of safety even when Valerie’s voice radiated a sinister calm as she said, “I know what to do now.”

Next word is radiate

@ivanskilling I don't know the context behind this scene, but I think I can say this with a good amount of confidence: Ray, you are an asshole. Kyler, honey, you can do better than him :triumph:. Also, great little cliffhanger there! I don't know what Valerie is planning, but I am already in full support of it :joy: I may need to give this story a look! Just looking at this little bit, t seems really well written and interesting! :wink:

Falon looked confused, but shook her head in response. “No, of course not… but I don’t understand why you’re bringing this up,” she said.

“A soldier doesn’t spare anyone, Falon… especially Vanguard soldiers. The training they go through is twisted and corrupt. No one… absolutely no one can break free from it.”

Falon sighed and looked at the ground. “The Flaming Arrow did,” she said, her voice almost a whisper.

Kaito said nothing as he looked toward his friend. The sun was starting to set over the horizon, merging with the western borders and causing Falon’s long red hair to radiate like the heart of an ember. She refused to meet his gaze as he stared down at her.

“The Flaming Arrow is dead,” Kaito said finally. He made his way toward the boulders, not looking back as he called over his shoulder at Falon. “Check in on Shergar for me on your way back, will you?”

Next word is whisper

Bumping this :sparkles:

@Toastbuster love the conflict and that hair description

Darzsa’s eyes flitted around the room at the dim lights and piano in the corner warming up with a saxophone. The low melody quartered them off from the rest of the hall, from the rest of the world. What other first date could top this? But if Jo kept this up, Darzsa wouldn’t have to find out.

“How did you do all this?”

“That trumpet player, Jimmy, Henry’s seeing plays here some nights and is the co-owner’s cousin. I asked Henry if he’d do me a favor, and the boss didn’t ask any questions. There are some...other conditions, but we have the place to ourselves. No stares, no whispers, just us.”

Next word is below

Ohhh @foxnflames, I love this set up. Sultry, intimate. Beautiful <3

He slowly lowered himself onto the couch, his brow furrowed tightly as he faced the ground, eyes closing tightly as he blinked back tears. His body tensed as he gripped the leather cushion below him before he released a soft laugh, "That's just...a joke, right? Just s-some prank, right?"

Her face softened, that small smile returning, "You're sweating sweetheart, take slow breaths. Calm down."

He gritted his teeth, flinching as she ignored his question, "Please answer me."

"You're panicking, babe. Relax and calm down-"

"ANSWER ME IRA!"

Next work is Joke

@CodeMonkeyArts I'm very worried about your character! Sounds like he's having a really tough time with whatever this mystery reveal was. :frowning: Hopefully Ira is able to help calm him down!

The ride to the courthouse was uneventful. As Dante had predicted, Raf had been more than happy to accompany them. The bruises on his face had turned a dark shade of purple overnight, and one eye was nearly swollen shut, but he seemed strangely upbeat during their excursion. He smiled cheerfully and traded jokes with Christina in the cab, even cracking one or two at his own expense. At one point, he happened to catch Dante’s eye in the rearview mirror of the car, and grinned shyly before turning back to Christina and laughing at her last remark.

The next word is: mirage

hahahhahahaHAHAAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!:hohoho:

...Nope.

I agree, Kyler should really move on from Ray. :wink: Ohoho Valerie is planning something with quite spectacular repercussions indeed! And thank you, I hope you'll enjoy the story! :heart_03: