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This thread is for anyone looking to exchange some helpful feedback! The rules are simple:

  • Post one genuine compliment and one constructive criticism about the comic above your post.

  • Please do not post more than one criticism per response! I want this to be as non-intimidating as possible. :slight_smile:

  • Don't forget to post a link to your own comic, so the next person can do the same for yours.

  • Feel free to post feedback on multiple comics posted in the thread. It doesn't have to be directly above yours.

Here's my comic to get the chain going. I'll come back later to give feedback to other people!

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The art is fantastic! I love that it sort of emulates the style of Asian paintings, especially with the backgrounds and style of the panels and word bubbles. The eyes on the characters can be a little too anime sparkly at times and it doesn't go with the rest of the style too well.

@Inspector_Spinda

I'ts really intuigiung so far bc of it's description and it's very clean but stylised artstyle.. I could easily see it become animated e.g.

constructive criticism: it looks a bit static because it lacks those ... what's the word... sound and special effects? like when he puts a bottle on the ground you'd write "clank" ... or when the squirrel is at the trashbin its "rummage" or something ... as well as action/speed lines

they are definitely not a must, but readers are so very acustomed to them that without them, the pages can be very "silent"

also it's a great device ot set moods or draw attention to things

I simply love how you blend the colors :'D it's such an eye candy

As for construtive criticism which I'm usually not used to doing before, while the style is nice, anatomy may need some work (honestly I struggle with these as well)

@keii4ii Heya, is this thread open for novels too, or just comics? If just for comics, would you mind if I make a similar thread for novels? I'd ofc link and credit the original idea back to this post ^^

i love the cover , those flying flaming things looks intense

great job!

heres my manga , your feedback is greatly appreciated :grinning:

I think it'd be best to have a separate one for novels, since critiquing a comic can be very different from critiquing a novel. Feel free to make a thread for novels! :smiley:

There isn't another comic immediately above my post, so I think I might just post a comic I want critiqued here and compliment the next one, if that's okay with you guys. :slight_smile:

I was thinking that as well. I'll get to it! :slight_smile:

@simplykit19 All right, here's my compliment and criticism.

Compliment: I really dig the video game-esque style you seem to be going for. Gives me a bit of a "Dark Souls" or "Bloodborne" vibe.

Criticism: Implementation of the text seems a bit sloppy and basic to me.

Hope that helps! Can't wait to see what you guys have to say about mine! :smile:

@aqua03 You can post feedback for any of the other comics already posted, too. Actually I think @Carossmo got skipped (the person after them posted feedback on my comic, I think??? The description doesn't fit Caro's comic)... so here goes!

@Carossmo I really like your cartoony style. It's expressive and marshmallow-fluffy; really works well for the mellow slice of life story you've got!

As for a criticism, this is a nitpick so take it with a grain of salt: sometimes there are very airbrushy looking parts in your comic, e.g. gradient backdrops, the sunlight effects in Paro-Paro. The rest of your art style is very organic, with that charming crayon-like line quality, so I feel the airbrushy look doesn't fit. What if you gave some texture to your gradients? Made it look like you drew it with a crayon or something? I hope that made sense!

@simplykit19 You forgot the criticism part!

Ah, cool. I went back and added my compliments and criticism to my post earlier.

your comic's easy to follow and the dialogue is well written. I also like the expressions and poses you draw, they're consistent and fluid. however, I think your lineart/coloring can be a bit messy at times, watch out for things going past the lines such as on clothes, or even at the borders

here's my comic

I love the bit of surprise interaction between the two villains we have in your comic. I honestly didn't see it coming and it was a nice surprise! I feel like we don't see that sort of interrelationship stuff often enough with villains because "They are bad and we must hate them!".

I feel like sometimes it can be easy to get a bit lost on what is happening. The most recent chapter I'm guessing is a dream maybe? But it's not getting played off as one. Maybe the confusion is intentional but I'm not certain anymore.

All that said, I am hooked and subscribed!

Your character feels very "human"! Both in writing, and visuals, MC shows a wide range of emotions we (the readers) can relate to which makes her very easy to root for and gets us to keep reading to see what's going on !
The only real thing that bothered me was that there were very little establishing shots. I'm actually all for using a lot of close-ups but it was a bit hard to understand where the story is set, what the place looks like, when almost all the panels are closeups.

here's mine!

Good to read something new here. And this one I haven't read.
I really like the tone in this comic. The way it is all just a normal routine to die and go to hell like getting into college or something. Good story and good dialog.

Can’t tell if your choice of the speech bubbles is the right ones? As long as you can read the text it doesn't matter I guess? But be careful how you use them.

Here is mine

I'm pretty sure we're only supposed to respond to one... plus I don't want to confuse the next person