@aqua03 You can post feedback for any of the other comics already posted, too. Actually I think @Carossmo got skipped (the person after them posted feedback on my comic, I think??? The description doesn't fit Caro's comic)... so here goes!
@Carossmo I really like your cartoony style. It's expressive and marshmallow-fluffy; really works well for the mellow slice of life story you've got!
As for a criticism, this is a nitpick so take it with a grain of salt: sometimes there are very airbrushy looking parts in your comic, e.g. gradient backdrops, the sunlight effects in Paro-Paro. The rest of your art style is very organic, with that charming crayon-like line quality, so I feel the airbrushy look doesn't fit. What if you gave some texture to your gradients? Made it look like you drew it with a crayon or something? I hope that made sense!
@simplykit19 You forgot the criticism part!