12 / 21
Nov 2018

So far out of 24 completed pages, I only have 1 that I scrapped in lieu of a different composition/layout xD

So I had started to draw this page originally and it wasn't bad, just continuing to follow the guys as they walked back to town, seeing said town in the distance, and the tower sticking up in the middle with the rain clouds spewing out of it.

I took a few month break from my comic during the process of drawing the page though, and when I came back I decided it didn't really emphasize the things I wanted to for the page. I wound up drawing this instead for the final version:

The tower is no longer a tiny element in the distance, it's clearly the main focus, and the rain clouds now frame the top in an interesting way. I think the 2nd version is definitely better :>

Well I don't really have a scrapped page but I have scrapped panels which I didn't use in my comic, I just compiled them in a dumb xD I figured they weren't drawn in the angle I wanted and later on I drew them better and they made it to the first chapter!

I will be scrapped them all... probably. They just frustrated me too much because it is kinda hard to make a scroll type comic while I could only use my phone to draw and they ended up having a lotsa different face and pretty messy, plus I made a mistake by using the 4A size to draw them (I don't think anyone drawing them whole with an 4A paper size? Can someone confirm this to me?) and it's getting painful to look at them at the moment. I will be redrawing everything in the future but will keep the looks of the pose and characters the same.

(Only ss since I didn't took the .jpg file of them all and the file might ended up being too big to fit here)



I don't have scrapped pages but I do have scrapped rough panels. I wasn't looking where I was drawing.

This was my first attempt at doing a page, i didnt use it because i changed the story and character, making the story less complicated, also because it was the first one i made and it didnt feel right when i looked at it(i just knew i messed up somehow :pensive:).

8 days later

I have more of these panels that I decided not to use them as they are, instead I saved them as a scrapped WIP and made them better for my upcoming comic chapter!