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May 2019

It does look better for sure! ^^

Literary the first time someone said something so nice about my hatching, haha! Thank you! :grinning:

The bottom right looks difficult but you nailed it. Of course the middle sketch on the second image is my favorite!

I've been working on a model sheet for Flare and I like how it looks, but something feels a bit off about his proportions in regards to his arms and boots. Can anyone else give me some feedback on what could possibly be wrong?

The arms just need to be a little bit shorter, have the wrists up by his hips and the rest of his hand just below that.

Thanks of the feedback. I'll see what I can do on that. Might also make the boots either a bit bulkier, or the arms a bit less bulky. Because that seems to be adding to the weird top-heaviness of it it seems.

His upper legs are a little short , maybe lengthen them a tiny bit also?

That could also work as well. Again, thanks for all the feedback, It really helps. :slight_smile:

@aqua03

Yeah, @dragonsparking is right. I’ve learned that the fingertips of hands end at the bottom of the crotch. It’s a weird reference, but that’s what I was told to be vigilant of when drawing proportions. Other than those things that were mentioned, it looks great! :slight_smile:

Thanks. Didn't know that about the finger tips. Will definitely try to be more mindful about that now. :slight_smile: