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Sep 2022

Thanks so much for doing this! This has been my cover for about a year now, and some things I'm already aware of are the resolution isn't as great as I'd like, and the anatomy could use some work. The story is about a 30-something woman who is trying to run an independent grim reaper business (The Sapphire Bay Reaper Company) in a bad economy with limited funding. Meanwhile, her worst employee (gold hair) finds, and tries to help a lost girl (brown hair) who appears dead but insists otherwise.

Your art and compositions look cool! But your logo is lost in the mayhem :slight_smile: You could consider making it bigger, even if that means it will occupy the top forth of your page.

Cool design! I would make things a little more prominent like so.

Don't be afraid to take things a bit off the edges, most of the times you will get a much more dynamic outcome!

Keep up the good work!

I like the addition of the word The, but the word Paw is crushed under the paw! You could also try something like this

Cool artwork! I propose you bring you title up so it gets more prominent and rearrange your typography a bit. Something like this.

Keep up the good work!