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Jun 30

Hey there, fellow book enthusiasts and aspiring writers!

As I continue to embark on my journey as a budding writer, I'm always on the lookout for ways to enhance my storytelling skills. That's where you, come in! Your feedback is an invaluable resource for me, and I would be over the moon if you could share your thoughts on my work. Are you falling in love with the characters, or do they need a little extra sparkle? How's the pacing—is it keeping you on the edge of your seat or sending you off to dreamland? Are there any tonal gymnastics that are making you dizzy, or do you enjoy the rollercoaster ride? And, of course, if there's anything that's leaving you scratching your head, I'm all ears!

Whether you prefer to drop comments, private message, or discuss on discord, you let me know what works best! As every bit of input is a step toward growth and improvement.

If you're also a fellow wordsmith in search of feedback, don't hesitate to reach out! Let's help each other by swapping reviews or offering story insights. Together, we'll learn, grow, and create amazing literary adventures.

I am open to read and review as many chapters as I have currently available under my novel. For example if you have 30 chapters, I will only give feedback on the first 20. Likewise if you are starting and only have 5 chapters than you would only need to read the first 5 of my novel.

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4 months later

Hello !! not looking for a review in exchange right now, but i read the first chapter, and i want to let you know that from what I could tell, your writing style was genuinely good ! a lot of web novels, while they have good plots and characters, miss the taste aspect. but the writing seems clean, not cringe, but artful--akin to writing in paperback. haha, a clumsy way to say it's really neat.
i hope you're able keep working on it ^^ even though it's been a while since this thread was posted,,

29 days later

Aww thank you so much for your feedback! I am glad to know that my style of writing is enjoyable, it is one of the things I do struggle with as I write my webnovels. I fear that they don't read as quick or have fast paced flows like others on the site. Thank you!

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