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May 2022

I want to do a scene where a stick figure gets his head chopped off (no blood). Naota isn't particularly terrified by this, but D starts freaking out.

The crazy thing is I can get away with this scene since it's stick figures, but the reason I'm not going to do it is because this sorta humor goes against the whole message of the comic (which is a spoiler :3). Also I hate killing for the sake of humor (unless I'm proving a point).

What about you guys?

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hmm one i kinda wanted to do for the first chapter is a large scale battle with alot of both sides units in it many explosions and action, why i didn't is that would be alot to do and might look messy

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! I will unsubscribe if you do that!

I want to draw naked human bodies and for several weird reasons we live in a world where this is forbidden.
You can get through with all kind of violence but not with showing the natural human body

as long as you show those naked bodies being sexually assaulted, you can get away with calling it art (I'm looking at you, Game of Thrones), but as soon as they start enjoying themselves, or are just there to look attractive, then it's pornography and all artistic merit your story might have had goes out the window.

What are you talking about I'm not salty about this. I definitely haven't been stewing on this issue for years on end by now. I'm not upset about it you're upset about it.

Yeah!
One example of many:
I have been banned from facebook for uploading a sketch from a woman from a life drawing class, you couldn´t
even see any details and it was just a natural looking, older woman standing in a 0% sexual position and I also
uploaded the picture to a group dedicated to the topic :smiley: :smiley: :smiley:
Male and female nipples is another topic but this is another topic :slight_smile:

Most things I really want to do, but can't rather have to do with me still developing my artistic skills while using the comic as a means to do that.
There's one thing I finally managed to do though, from which I hestitated in the first 2 1/2 chapters overall, probably creating a rocky start in the matter of showing a little more blood than usual, but I'm gonna proceed regardless from there. If I ever get the chance to remake the first 2 1/2 chapters, I'll probably not hold back like I did ^^"

Context, if you don't care much about spoilers

Being that I myself usually cringe at the sight of major blood loss, I tried keeping it light at first, but as the first character death came up in chapter 4, I pushed myself out of that comfort zone because I really wanted to leave an impact - this one intended to be shocking from the eyes of the protagonist, which I think I did convey fairly okay.
I mean, I didn't put my warnings in the comic's description for no reason and I also knew that I couldn't keep things light with how things will turn out in the story at a certain point regarding the Phantasms, the people controlling them and wanting to show a glimpse of the dangers of the world the main group found themselves in, so I basically drew the scene out the way it stands as of now.

That being said, there's probably gonna be a handful of scenes like these to come in the far future, but there's gonna be a lot heavier ones relating to a different topic, which hasn't come up yet and will take a long time to get there, but I really want to get to.

Sort of similar to what @Lensing said.

I just feel like you can get away with a lot more in print comics when it comes to nudity or characters talking about sex.

Heck, I think of some of the humor from the older Simpsons that passed as TV-PG in the 90s would probably get your webcomic set to Mature.

I sort of wish I could write a webcomic which is sort of like an adult animated sitcom (something like the Simpsons or King of the Hill) but I don’t know if I could really get away with that unless I hosted my own site or just willing to just set the series to Mature.

I had this one scene in mind that I had to change for a pretty dumb reason. That dumb reason being me and my bad planning.

So I have this scene of my MC pulling down some covers on the side of his house. I sketched it from this angle:

Then I almost finish it when I remember the character has a plum tree on this side of his house. I've drawn it before and plants are important to the story so I can't just ignore it!

So I start painting the tree with the background layers off because I am stupid. When I turn the layers back on...

By now I feel like an idiot for dumping hours into this one scene that can't work. And I was really stuck on the scene being from this angle for some reason? Thankfully his house is pretty symmetrical and so is his design.

Now I flip it and I just need to draw the chrysanthemums that are on the other side of the garden. Which I redrew like three times because I haven't drawn chrysanthemums in color before and now my first time doing them is this scene instead of another scene I planned for practice.

I think I wasted two days doing this. All for this one scene in a fast paced sequence no one will spend more than five seconds looking at.

Aaaaaa, continuity errors! They are the worst T_T A moment of silence for all the time we've lost to them ... :pensive:


I am ... nervous about doing one or two scenes I have in mind, but I wouldn't really say I can't; I'm sufficiently committed to them such that I'll keep backups and repost them on other sites if I have to :stuck_out_tongue:

This is so bizarre to me as a former art student. I can't remember how many naked models we had drawn and it was never sexual. :smiley:

@NickRowler I feel like the main reason print can get away with it is because they make it, ship it to a store and it's someone else's obligation to make sure kids don't see it. And as for adults, well we can decide on our own if we want comics with nudity or not.

But yeah, I want to draw nudity in my comic but have to be careful with how much I show so I don't brake the rules.

I was thinking about how some of these graphic novels and comics were in the library at my high school. So I guess someone thought they were OK for teens, not sure if that mindset has changed in the last 12 years.

What I would like, but I still have a lot to learn, are landscapes, cities and machines, I'm terrible at that. I only know how to draw people and animals.

This is a bit tricky because if I make a particular scene where my ocs are walking down the street, or there's a chase scene, I have to find a way to make it look amazing.

I'd love to draw the town they are in way more. Like a full blown scene with them in the town center, but It's just too time consuming. I've been sprinkling in buildings and cars here and there.

Future scene - full blown action scene with cop cars! Sounds fun, but too many car scenes are gonna take me out lol.

When I was scripting I really wanted an action scene on a train but I couldn't find a single reason for the characters to end up on a train XD and I tried everything, it just didn't make sense.

I also can't draw trains... lmao.

naked scenes with boobies, genitals hanging out and all

well i did before but got flagged and had to stop lol rules are rules

I actually would like to do more slice-of-life scenes with just my characters hanging out but for pacing and tonal reasons I can't, I need to keep that to a minimum. it IS a horror story after all :sweat_smile:

@NickRowler I feel like it's kind of a generational thing? I don't know about you, but I was born in the late 80s. And YA and middle grade level books and comics didn't really exist here. No one cared we went from themes for kids to adult books and graphic novels as teens.

When I was in middle school, my school had like 10 mangas and one of them was Ramna 1/2 and their were 2 Inu Yasha volumes. The librarian went in with a marker and blotched out the nudity and curse words.

When my sister started middle school, that was wen manga really boomed and they added a bunch of manga. The librarians did vet the comics and censor them. My sister had a copy of Full Metal Alchemist with post it note asking if the word "sex" should be blotched out. And their was one manga that they felt got a little too graphic for their liking and they ended up tearing out the pages. So their was one volume of a manga with half of the pages missing.

I found a lot of it a bit hypocritical because some of the novels in the library were far more graphic than the mangas.

I remember reading inuyasha in grade school and that was okay for some reason although it probably shouldn't have been.