Thanks for this thread!
So, first, yes this is an entry for the Writer's Camp contest, but I just really really need feedback and contructive criticism because I feel there's something missing but I just can't figure out what it is, so please guys, criticize!
Here's the novel :
And here's the disclaimer : it deals with mental health disorders such as PTSD, depression, bipolar disorder, anxiety and such.
To be honest, mental health issues are the core of this story, but at the same time, it talk not about the issues themselves but the people that live with them.
Hope I'm making myself clear ^^"