so iām not a big fantasy person but i enjoyed your comic so far!
art is fantastic, super atmospheric, great coloring
the font put me off a bit, the boxes felt like they were mimicking a manga style which is fine but felt unnecessary here; i believe theyāre often vertical in manga because the text is written top to bottom but when youāre writing a comic in english (over translating one) thatās not completely necessary. not sure why the text was also in box format.
the font didnāt compliment th story too well, it felt too bubbly and the changes in size put me off.
last point about the speech is that itās often spaced in a way that makes the reading difficult. i.e.
āIndeed Iām aware
of it all, so
..
enlighten meā
might work better if it was spaced like so;
āIndeed,
Iām aware of it all
so...
enlighten meā
essentially, work the spaces between the text to fit the pacing of the reading.
overall: great art, intriguing story, maybe look into working with a letterer
wreck me