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I really like the lineart and toning. It really gives off a manga-ish vibe, and the way it's done really establishes a good buildup for the plot.

Er, this page below is pretty simple, since it's from my gag comic, Kurumi's After Hours.
It parodies the done-to-death "two gamers on a couch" format of webcomics.

@atlas Oh my, super cute characters. The format of a large panel above a small blurb of text reminds me of a children's picture book, in vertical format. I'm guessing it's an all ages, maybe look into adding a link to it in this forum thread ^_^



Newest page Ch 5 :: Gryphon Ride
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The newest page of Oops, is flight! Flying gryphons everywhere! <3

First let me say that your buildings are fantastic. I'm so jelly of how well they are done. The perspective and everything is excellent. The characters also look interesting, I like the effect of the last panel too.


Here is the Latest page for Discount Religion.1

Your style is beautiful!! Very clean and well done greyscale shading aand the characters are well drawn too-- this looks very professional to me! AWEsome work! smiley


This week in Serpent: Merek gets a new hairdo, Wex puts his foot down, aand Barron rides in on his noble steed <3
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I really love your use of expressions, i still have problems getting those to look the way i want them to.
but i think you're doing a great job with it c: i also like your backgrounds in your comic. <3
(and the faded out speech-bubble is a really clever idea c: )

Here is the latest page of In the Name of the Creator1

There's an interesting mystery set up in the design of this character right off the get-go: Why are their eyes closed/seared shut? What's with that crazy third eye? What does their armor do? Basically your character's design is really intriguing and that's a great way to get a new reader invested in your comic! Well done! Speaking further, I love that the character's skin tone creates a focal point on the page, in contrast to the rest of it, which is great for informing readers where to start!


The latest page of The Crimson Fly!
This week: A recap of sorts of the first issue!

I like the scenary you gave to this page, it looks like this "Rei" has a very misterious aura the way you drew it.
Is that even his name? I ask too! he could be lying and look how he's just playing there on the table and his finger!

Latest in Final Light

This is quite good, I really like the third panel, the background and the pose of the guy is very nice. The dialogue is quite good too, it gives the reader a sense of whats to come and builds anticipation. I think the shading could be better though. The shading is a little unnatural, try making your brush edges a little sharper. Also the robe of the girl is a bit too embossed and the hair is also also too embossed at the tips but very flat on top. I also think the watermark is a bit distracting, maybe it'd be better to make it more subtle so it doesn't overshadow your work. The facial expressions and anatomy is spot on though! I also like the cute sign you drew in the third panel ^^


Latest update from Sundaze4
I actually updated four pages but this one was the most substantial.

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