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Oct 2015

First let me say that your buildings are fantastic. I'm so jelly of how well they are done. The perspective and everything is excellent. The characters also look interesting, I like the effect of the last panel too.


Here is the Latest page for Discount Religion.1

Your style is beautiful!! Very clean and well done greyscale shading aand the characters are well drawn too-- this looks very professional to me! AWEsome work! smiley


This week in Serpent: Merek gets a new hairdo, Wex puts his foot down, aand Barron rides in on his noble steed <3
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I really love your use of expressions, i still have problems getting those to look the way i want them to.
but i think you're doing a great job with it c: i also like your backgrounds in your comic. <3
(and the faded out speech-bubble is a really clever idea c: )

Here is the latest page of In the Name of the Creator1

There's an interesting mystery set up in the design of this character right off the get-go: Why are their eyes closed/seared shut? What's with that crazy third eye? What does their armor do? Basically your character's design is really intriguing and that's a great way to get a new reader invested in your comic! Well done! Speaking further, I love that the character's skin tone creates a focal point on the page, in contrast to the rest of it, which is great for informing readers where to start!


The latest page of The Crimson Fly!
This week: A recap of sorts of the first issue!

I like the scenary you gave to this page, it looks like this "Rei" has a very misterious aura the way you drew it.
Is that even his name? I ask too! he could be lying and look how he's just playing there on the table and his finger!

Latest in Final Light

This is quite good, I really like the third panel, the background and the pose of the guy is very nice. The dialogue is quite good too, it gives the reader a sense of whats to come and builds anticipation. I think the shading could be better though. The shading is a little unnatural, try making your brush edges a little sharper. Also the robe of the girl is a bit too embossed and the hair is also also too embossed at the tips but very flat on top. I also think the watermark is a bit distracting, maybe it'd be better to make it more subtle so it doesn't overshadow your work. The facial expressions and anatomy is spot on though! I also like the cute sign you drew in the third panel ^^


Latest update from Sundaze4
I actually updated four pages but this one was the most substantial.

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I love your line work! Very nice use contrast and whatnot--- very pleasing to the eye. Hahaha and I also love their expressions! Awesome page!


This week in Serpents Merek, Barron, and Ryder compete for who is the biggest fool on this page! I personally can't decide X)
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Firstly, I really like the pacing of your panels @HeSerpenty. This page made me giggle smile (Guy runs by laughing like Nelson from the Simpsons.) I'm really curious now about the rest of the story! Also, Your colouring is really nice and the backgrounds are a good balance of 'clear and detailed' and 'simple and non-distracting'.
Now excuse me, I'm going to go read the rest of your comic wink


Here are my latest page(s) (They don't make sense without one another. You can choose to comment on only one if you'd prefer to be fair wink )

Aw, thanks! I know I don't have to, but I like that you connect the panels by having elements of the next panel (Rei's hair, Max's speech bubbles) pop into the previous one. It gives the reader's eye an automatic place to go and leads them across the page. Also, I like that you play with speech bubbles and that they aren't all the same format in order to denote who's speaking and how (out loud vs. thoughts). Good job!

I was actually hoping to comment on one of your pages earlier in this thread but someone beat me to it! Your style is so cute and charming and the format of your comic is definitely recognizable. Just the fact that you go with something warmer like brown instead of black gives me a sorta cozy feel when I look at it. Maybe this sounds a little weird, but it makes me happy in the same way things like Animal Crossing do!

Here's the latest page of City of Blank4!

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@Riko
I LOVE the coloring and over all look of your comic. Honestly it's what I'm trying to strive for in my own but failing at. And that food! The flow is really nice too, I'll have to subscribe and find out more.


This is the latest page for Discount Religion. I'm experimenting with the line and color.