Really expressive! I love the use of blue lined borders, too. It's all clear, bubbly, and..~ positive! Haha
Wow! there's just so much detail on this page, it's a feast for my eyes! Now I wish I was there in real life ^^
My latest from SweetGum:
@atlas Oh my, super cute characters. The format of a large panel above a small blurb of text reminds me of a children's picture book, in vertical format. I'm guessing it's an all ages, maybe look into adding a link to it in this forum thread ^_^
Newest page Ch 5 :: Gryphon Ride3
The newest page of Oops, is flight! Flying gryphons everywhere! <3
Nicely done, @CyndiFoster! I love how you did the characters and the environment!
Here's the latest page for my comic, The Chronicles of SolLuna.
First let me say that your buildings are fantastic. I'm so jelly of how well they are done. The perspective and everything is excellent. The characters also look interesting, I like the effect of the last panel too.
Here is the Latest page for Discount Religion.1
@Benzy I really like the beats you capture in this page. The flow works really nicely and feels very natural. Also, well done on the cereal! Makes me want to go eat a bowl ^.^ The colors ard composition of this page is really appealing. Good work!
Hi Cielle. i like your dialogue! Not only in this page (btw) It`s a good story and the coloring is great too. The whole page is balanced. Good job!
Many things happening here o.o
I want to say I really love the way you colour, it looks so pretty, I want to learn how you did it!
And woah, what's going on? it's the end for that girl? It looks interesting
Latest in Final Light1
Your style is beautiful!! Very clean and well done greyscale shading aand the characters are well drawn too-- this looks very professional to me! AWEsome work!
This week in Serpent: Merek gets a new hairdo, Wex puts his foot down, aand Barron rides in on his noble steed <32
I really love your use of expressions, i still have problems getting those to look the way i want them to.
but i think you're doing a great job with it c: i also like your backgrounds in your comic. <3
(and the faded out speech-bubble is a really clever idea c: )
Here is the latest page of In the Name of the Creator1
There's an interesting mystery set up in the design of this character right off the get-go: Why are their eyes closed/seared shut? What's with that crazy third eye? What does their armor do? Basically your character's design is really intriguing and that's a great way to get a new reader invested in your comic! Well done! Speaking further, I love that the character's skin tone creates a focal point on the page, in contrast to the rest of it, which is great for informing readers where to start!
The latest page of The Crimson Fly!
This week: A recap of sorts of the first issue!
@SkipperWing I really like the layout and color palette of this page! It creates a very cool atmosphere that really sucks you in to the story. The red accents really pop. Nicely done!
The latest page of Reus
this week, Max struggles to accept that she was wrong about the identity of Rei.
I like the scenary you gave to this page, it looks like this "Rei" has a very misterious aura the way you drew it.
Is that even his name? I ask too! he could be lying and look how he's just playing there on the table and his finger!
Latest in Final Light
This is quite good, I really like the third panel, the background and the pose of the guy is very nice. The dialogue is quite good too, it gives the reader a sense of whats to come and builds anticipation. I think the shading could be better though. The shading is a little unnatural, try making your brush edges a little sharper. Also the robe of the girl is a bit too embossed and the hair is also also too embossed at the tips but very flat on top. I also think the watermark is a bit distracting, maybe it'd be better to make it more subtle so it doesn't overshadow your work. The facial expressions and anatomy is spot on though! I also like the cute sign you drew in the third panel ^^
Latest update from Sundaze4
I actually updated four pages but this one was the most substantial.
I love your line work! Very nice use contrast and whatnot--- very pleasing to the eye. Hahaha and I also love their expressions! Awesome page!
This week in Serpents Merek, Barron, and Ryder compete for who is the biggest fool on this page! I personally can't decide X)3
Firstly, I really like the pacing of your panels @HeSerpenty. This page made me giggle (Guy runs by laughing like Nelson from the Simpsons.) I'm really curious now about the rest of the story! Also, Your colouring is really nice and the backgrounds are a good balance of 'clear and detailed' and 'simple and non-distracting'.
Now excuse me, I'm going to go read the rest of your comic
Here are my latest page(s) (They don't make sense without one another. You can choose to comment on only one if you'd prefer to be fair )
Aw, thanks! I know I don't have to, but I like that you connect the panels by having elements of the next panel (Rei's hair, Max's speech bubbles) pop into the previous one. It gives the reader's eye an automatic place to go and leads them across the page. Also, I like that you play with speech bubbles and that they aren't all the same format in order to denote who's speaking and how (out loud vs. thoughts). Good job!
@Jewe11s I am LOVING your lighting effects, holy crap! They must have taken forever to get right, and it works perfectly! And it helps flow through the pages really well. Great job! __ Now I have to go see how this links in to everything else!