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this is great! i love the action and explosion's art work and i like how you did the framing .

my new page is NSFW so im posting the link Here3

it's the start of the new story and crime boss Stan Francisco and his lover are about to flash back to how she lost an arm....

thank you! The written language I made up, but what it translates to is a blend of real life languages. So I guess it's 'real', but no one would speak it in the same way it's used in Reus. Unfortunately I'm no Tolkien, I can't make up languages with their own syntax and grammar and such ^.^

Quite the scene you've created. At first, it looks like an ordinary scene of two lovers expressing their inner feelings, but then carries greater meaning (as well as changing the whole dynamic of the page)after seeing that last panel. It's like I can imagine watching it at the theater. Excellent page!


Here's the latest of my comic Strike Pup:

I like the page layout here. Easy to follow, the relationship between the two comes off very respectful and nurturing. What I like the most is the action and the way you carried out the sound effect in the WHAM! I like that you took the time to draw it out, so kudos there! The only thing that stands out that'll make this all the more better is the use of the "I" with the crossbars. I think it'll read better if it's "lowercase" -- (like in "It's the truth")-- I know you're capitalizing the sentence, but I think it'll visually look better in the bubble. I'm still trying to establish my "rules" for lettering-- so please take that suggestion with a grain of salt.
I also like the different brush strokes in panel 3 and 4.
Good job all around!


From The Pale

I love that you take the perspective of the poor bird that needs to go urgently!
It's colorful and funny. What more can you ask for? Maybe an on going story arch? I guess I'll have to read more to find out...

Here's the new Shades Of Men1... Not your usual barbecue night!

I just saw this page in your comic and I like how you did the crowd scene. Others would've just made shadow people instead of drawing people one by one. And looks like Lev doesn't give a damn about the barbecue and want to say something important to the crowd. Awesome page @Jrej !XD

Page 307 of University of Speed1 is my newest page. smile

nice page mappy, i see you too put lots of work into glass. i love the shadows too. not following the story but that one page is intresting and dramatic.

here is the second of two pages i posted today for talesfromswipecity, this fat guy is mob boss jarron who has just had a girls arm sliced off for stealing.

Well done Aron. I really like the dialogues in this pages. I founded them funny. The second and third panel also had a great from for a shooting scene.

Now for me here is the latest page of my short web comic Eros shot. In one sentence this short web comic could be described as two people getting shot in love. Check it out if you want to see what this synopsis means;

I really like the composition of this! The wing and swirls frame the couple beautifully and the winged lady gives nice weight to the side countering the decision to place the couple smack middle of everything. That creates easily very static image but here is none of that to be seen. Slightly sketchy lines and muted colors also give very nice atmosphere here.


Latest page or Fallacy:

@tyinfaowei1: I think the art is really good, man. Haven't read it yet, but you have a great sense of lighting and color contrasts!

Thatbeingsaid you have to comment on the one above, so...I shall do so!

@BraveHeartTatsumaki: I was a little confused but i laughed at the pacing with the, uh, horse guy giving both of them piggy back rides hahahaha. (Panel 6 has a syntax error though, not sure if you meant to)
and "Ohhohohoho, I'm not an idiot" <- laughed


Here be miiine~


For Cosmic Fish

Wow, this page is gorgeous! I love the really soft lighting you have going on here and the characters are awesome and something new I don't see a lot. I'm LOVING bird dude (I'm sure there's something much better to call him, please excuse my lack of originality). Overall, really beautiful page and that second to last panel is really nice to look at with that background! I'm a sucker for soft colors and you pulled them off.

Here's the latest page of City of Blank!

@Riko
The expression and humor going on throughout your brilliant paneling is fantastic. Especially the clear irritation of the fellow in the last panel. "You don't say..." It gave me a hearty chuckle, and yet remains a serious quote.
The coloring is wonderful as well, and the placement of sound effects doesn't interrupt the flow of context at all. Great work.

The most recent redrawn page for the first chapter of WORLDS.

I really love the linework and the use of tones in this, and those motion lines are fantastic. I always struggle with them. My one critique would be to tone or color the eyelashes in the top panel just a little off white, I didn't recognize them as eyelashes at first and thought the eyelid was just drawn a little jagged. Other then that though it's excellent!


Here is the latest page for Discount Religion.