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Neat job on this! Your outfits and designs really set the setting for this without me even being able to tell where they really are. I like that I can already have a pretty good idea of what this world may be and look like just from the designs incorporated on this page. And nice job on that expression in the 4th panel!

Here's the latest page for City of Blank!
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Very cool use of perspective! I especially like the last four panels. It's like watching a film!


Latest from SweetGum1:

I really like the "children's book illustration" feel that you have going here with these cute animals. Very unique and makes me want to read more!

Below check out the new cover for the second chapter of Beast Bait, I got colorist Roberto Diaz to color my art on this one. What do you guys think, should I use him again? smile

@dglisson I really like the cover artwork! It looks awesome, I like the coloring, it really captures a viewer's attention. Also I like the design of the cover, it's dynamic and gives a reader a hint about the story. The only thing is dark text on dark background, it's hard to notice and hard to read.
A new page from "Summerdays"

@Toad_Sta_Ovn That looks awesome to me! I really enjoy this piece. You did a nice job. I like stuff like this and without having to look your other stuff, it gives a real nice medieval/fantasy feel to it.

Really good stuff!

@KET I like your page. It has an engaging layout and I particularly like the last panel. It kind of acts like a twist in the story, you expect one thing then get another which makes it more interesting.

Here's my latest from All Fingers And Thumbs1

I'm impressed with how varied your art seems to be from panel to panel, its kind of all over the place, but it works for what your doing.

I'm open to any question or comments.

@Babel116, Hey there! Nice seeing a new (new for me to review) comic on the thread. I really like your designs and the focus on the characters in your panels. I think you can perhaps add a bit of color to add more dramatic affects (ie a red color on panel 4 maybe). You don't have a link to a higher resolution... so it is a bit hard to head here (and there's no link in your profile, I suggest adding one there). You noticeably changed font size on panel 7... can't tell if it is a whisper. Something to watch out for in the future. Overall, really good direction and set up in tone. Good job!


The Pale 1.21

Ha ha there's always that one guy busting balls. Great art and story as usual man!

Todays Juvies begins one of the more controversial story arcs in the series...Remember kids, it's called "Juvies" for a reason stuck_out_tongue

@Kaos_Comics aos_Comics Love the play on words, nice clean liens and good coloring. I liked it smile

Here is my latest page from yesterday,it's about my main characters and their wedding

@myimaginarypals --- it's a really funny and accurate depiction of cold feet. The art style's really fun for a gag strip too, with a lot of expression on the characters' faces that's very specific. The coloring is really fun as well.

The only suggestion I would offer you has more to do with lettering and editing. The capitalization and punctuation isn't very standard, or consistent. You've a misspelled word in the final panel: "altar". And the lettering's not really centered within the speech bubbles, which I think might help give it a more clean and polished look. It might be worth having a friend or someone help edit for those little details in the lettering, because the art and material is very good, and I think that small improvement might help you reach a bigger audience.

Also, totally put a hyper-link in your posts to your comic book, and then one on your forum profile too! That will help bring more traffic to your comic. : )

And for something entirely different, here's the latest page of my mystery/horror space opera, Atonement. : ) It's our first fully single panel page thus far, and is sort of a punctuation point for the rhythm of the opening narrative of the story.