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Mar 2023

Fast sketch of Julia at her day at business school.

I rewrote the whole story in 2 days after talking to my brother and I tried to force myself
to write the outline like he does. The whole story from start to finish on one piece of paper.
The good thing is that I have a proper end now and it feels much more like a real story.
Storytelling is not easy but I´m getting better at it every day and it´s the first story I´m
actually happy with and which feels like a real story.

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@Calculus_Homework ah yes, more teeth please :smiling_imp:

@Lensing great job! :muscle: I don't think I ever had a finished story and I probably never will, and honestly I bow to people who are able to do it (one of the reasons I am in awe with my writer lol). Glad you were able to write it all down!

@MerrowBros suit guy is just great! :grinning:

@l_vi aw, they're so bright and cute :blush:

Finished lining Yara/Vulf and this one. Dunno how I will finish the colors, but I need to try.

It´s only the rough story so far.

Storytelling is really incredibly hard in a lot of ways. But at least I like the genre and I got
good characters, a problem and an end and the story is not overloaded with crap.

I will start making notes for the chapters now

@Kelheor you got this :muscle: colors are no match to you :smirk:

@IndigoShirtProd the thing that makes me super happy is that my oc not only gave me a joy while drawing but it also made YOU happy :cry_01: If you want to finish it (its already complete in my opinion) then go ahead ! (I've been braggin about it for hours !)

A lil She-ra sketch.


@Katzalcoatl

Colors are looking dope!
I'd say just push the orange light more and have yellow highlights on the peak points of their faces--at least that could be a step further. I get stumped with finishing color/lighting too :cry_01:

@Lensing That’s actually important. Write every little scrap of detail you want to add into your story down somewhere. The more stories you tell, the easier it’ll become to outline the rough ideas you have for it (granted, storytelling is never easy like you already mentioned) and the planning stages for a strict beginning, middle, and end to a story gets easier as well.

Here’s Firewoman in Egyptian attire. Lighting someplace on fire :fire:.

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