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Aug 2020

I've really liked writing "Cirque de Halliwell". Since I'm using an episodic format for my series, I can stick with the "highlights" of their adventures. Like three of characters are what I call "insta-siblings", they have inside jokes, they fight, they tease, they're fiercely protective of each other. Instead of describing in detail how their friendship developed over the course of the novel and develop their relationship, I can just establish that "boom" these three are friends. I can use their dialogue and behavior to "show" their established friendship.

Part 3 has also been fun because I can really start to flesh out the characters. I'm starting to explore more of Jamie and Cole's shared history and give the other characters' subplots of their very own.

I'm a character development person. Nearly all the feedback that matters to me is about my character arcs and particular characters and interactions that people enjoy. That's really what makes me happy re: feedback, because that's pretty much the main thing that I'm trying to achieve. Plot is great and super important; setting can enrich things in all kinds of amazing ways; but character is what really matters to me and what I feel I'm best at.

Ooof now I'm nervous I'm gonna screw the scene up. I like how I've written it right now, just hope It'll come across the way I intended and I'm Gucci.

Honestly, your writing is amazing and I will continue to comment on that til the ends of time. (Or until I leave tapas anyway.)

Colors and characters. Many people tell me they like colors of my comic, as they are very bright and vibrant and nice to look at. I guess they also like my characters, the brothers and my bat design, lol. I'm also sure I trolled many people when it comes to bat, but they seem to like it, lol.

We are only starting so I'm sure there will more feedback on plot and character arcs, but for now I'm happy with the feedback.

"Why everyone likes my story?"

Well... a lot of people don't like it :sweat_smile:
So uuuhh... yeah I'm not sure why some people follow my story. Maybe out of pity? Or because they are friends with me.

To be honest, I think half the people who read my story do it for one character alone: the sassy, arrogant, manipulative, and extremely complicated man my MC prince falls in love with.

If I killed off that man, pretty sure my readers would kill me. XD

I would like to think my story invokes the feeling of a mid-2000s supernatural tv series, with characters people care about and a compelling and dramatic storyline. Having nice art also helps! I love my art style, and others seem to too. :slight_smile:

I think what people like about my comic are the artwork and the stories. The artwork is really cartoon-y with pastels so it looks innocent and fun (at least that's what some of my readers tell me). Each episode/chapter is somewhat about a relatable slice of life scenario based on my experiences and I think readers resonated with them. It's also kinda a gag comic with dry humor so I think the readers enjoy the comic's sense of humor.

you won't!! don't worry about that! (also me quietly enjoying someone else saying something's gucci)

thank you so much though :smile:

@uselessgoddess it's definitely preferable for me if someone has to tone it back a little than having no grounding at all. Webnovel readers may like fast-paced, minimalistic stories but I write for myself and my writing style is a) always going to be angled toward the style of traditional novels, and b) exactly what I want to read and nothing more. It's working okay so far!

Thinking about it, I'm not sure...

The chapters with the love interests interacting with each other are the most popular, but... they butt heads every time they meet at the moment. I also have a habit of writing conflicts. And by conflicts, I meant when the characters throw chairs at each other across the room. They also like it when I break the fourth wall. It's fun XD

It took me a second to form a coherent sentence because I saw cats. Then I went to your profile and saw more cats. YOU DO THE KITTY STORY :heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat:

Yazzz, I love cats. Probably even a cat addict. I love dogs too. But my first pets were felines so I have a longer experience with them. Although I felt like I messed them up with my story lol. Do you like cats too? :heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat::heart_eyes_cat:

I LOVE cats! I always scroll through popular to see where my story is and your cover always stood out to me.

Wah, so the catboy and the yellow background was effective, I see XD