I think I may have gotten here a bit late, but here's my comic
It's my first web comic; been out for a year so far and I've been having difficulties getting feedback (although I suck at giving it, so it's only fair). I'm curious to find out what I'm doing wrong that I'm not aware of. I know the art in the earlier pages is pretty harsh and there's a fight scene that definitely could've have been written better.
@artgeek616
I think the premise of the comic sounds cool. Although your first update doesn't really match it well. Maybe I'm a bit early and I'm not sure how often you post, but I think there should've been a little more to establish world. Maybe include Elizabeth and her daughter doing one of their evil schemes. Also some of the sfx look a bit hairy, you could probably remove some of the texture lines.
On the plus side, I love how expressive your characters are and how you played with the angle of the some of the panels (That was cool! Definitely do more of that)
@Boyle
Very cute and funny so far! I think the simple art style definitely matches the humor. The backgrounds are a little empty though. Maybe add a few people walking around or posters, etc. Not too much though.
@jappy0572
I think your comic is pretty cool! The art is nice and the world building is unique and easy to understand. Although it's minor, I think Thirteen's dragons could use a little more variations. They kinda look too similar. Either way, I like the premise so far and can't wait to see more of the world unfold!