I think I may have gotten here a bit late, but here's my comic
It's my first web comic; been out for a year so far and I've been having difficulties getting feedback (although I suck at giving it, so it's only fair). I'm curious to find out what I'm doing wrong that I'm not aware of. I know the art in the earlier pages is pretty harsh and there's a fight scene that definitely could've have been written better.
I think the premise of the comic sounds cool. Although your first update doesn't really match it well. Maybe I'm a bit early and I'm not sure how often you post, but I think there should've been a little more to establish world. Maybe include Elizabeth and her daughter doing one of their evil schemes. Also some of the sfx look a bit hairy, you could probably remove some of the texture lines.
On the plus side, I love how expressive your characters are and how you played with the angle of the some of the panels (That was cool! Definitely do more of that)
Very cute and funny so far! I think the simple art style definitely matches the humor. The backgrounds are a little empty though. Maybe add a few people walking around or posters, etc. Not too much though.
I think your comic is pretty cool! The art is nice and the world building is unique and easy to understand. Although it's minor, I think Thirteen's dragons could use a little more variations. They kinda look too similar. Either way, I like the premise so far and can't wait to see more of the world unfold!