(@muricio Just saying, if you're jumping into this thread now, perhaps it's better review some comics from the bottom of it The ones posted a while ago probably all got a bunch of comments already.)
Alright so I looked at a few comics here... again, keep in mind I'm a very amateur comic creator myself and those are just my personal views
@writercynknapp I'm honestly pretty confused by your comic lol. I only read a few episodes, but well there's so many of them... I can't really figure out what is happening in it at all, and I'm not too fond of comics using primarily 3DCG graphics... Well, overall it's just not for me.
@alzbetarudisova hmm it's not really my preferred kind of story, but in a technical sense I think your comic is already very solid. The simple linework works well, the characters all look unique, the color palette is nice, and overall it's easy to follow. Perhaps someone else will have a more elaborate comment on your comic?
@TheXtraordinaryX This is a pretty good intro honestly! It does give the reader some insight into the main character's life, and I can see the hints at future events. Looks like a solid comic in the making. If I could comment on anything specific, maybe it's how in some panels the backgrounds look a little flat, like, too geometric.
btw I don't know if this is an issue on webtoon's part, but on webtoon your comic looks really blurry and stretched out (on desktop at least), you might want to look into that.
Alright so BL isn't really my thing and that's the main reason I would not be interested in reading your comic but I thought I'd check it out.
I noticed drawing faces in profile doesn't seem like your strongest suit - with this kind of art style, you might want to draw them in a slightly more realistic style rather than very simplified anime like they appear now.
I don't recommend using the basic serif font - there are many fonts better suited for comics... also there are instances where the text touches edge of the bubble or just goes outside it - this is not good. Idk what do you use to draw the text bubbles but the jagged edge looks weird, perhaps you should use a different brush for them (or draw them by hand if they're not).
For your first time making a comic, it looks pretty good other than that, though!
If anyone feels like giving it a look, I'll be plugging my comic again It's been reviewed in this thread before, but I always could use more opinions.